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Moon-Sun

Oval and too white; light adorns forests on hills... a planet and star. Not brighter than stars; your shining halo gives life... less darkness, more light. Moon, give me glitter; sun, brighten my uncertain days... together as one. Written by Andrew Crisci for Linda-Marie's contest, " Haiku HodgePodge...Trio "

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/20/2012 4:06:00 AM
That is so good Andrew- I really enjoyed reading these haiku- I especially love the first group. Blessings, bren : )
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Date: 1/19/2012 10:11:00 AM
I wish to swim in the river of your poems.
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