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Moon-Lit Path

The end of the path, she’s there Looking truly deceitful Bright is the moon over her Trying to show love Russell Sivey Entrant into Brian Strand's “YOUR MY FAVOURITE” contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/25/2011 11:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest of Tracie "Dodoitsu Darkness" Russell. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/22/2011 1:09:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this great work..Sara

Tim B

Date: 9/22/2011 12:40:00 PM

Well done Russell, loved this one when I first saw it and put it in my favorites. Not at all surprised of it's first place win. Congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/22/2011 11:06:00 AM

Congrats Russell on 1st place win with this dynamic piece ..honored to share with u luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/22/2011 4:24:00 AM

Conmgratulations on the win in the contest of tracie,Russell

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/21/2011 8:32:00 PM

ohh maybe the moon will glup her down! the bad woman!! ;) congrad's on your win light & love

Constance La France

Date: 9/17/2011 11:17:00 PM

Short and quite wonderful, best of luck in the contest, and thanks for you ever comments and support of my poetry~~

Jack Horne

Date: 9/17/2011 4:22:00 PM

Clever take on the contest, Russell

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/17/2011 3:25:00 PM

yup, tracie's contest... see whata migraine can do, lol...:)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/17/2011 2:56:00 PM

a show-stopper, russell.. i drool!!. winniong wishes and hugggs! :) nette

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2011 1:57:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Good luck.Sara

Tim B

Date: 9/17/2011 1:00:00 PM

Russell this was excellent. Such imagery and a captivating glare I can imagine from this cold hearted woman. Love it, thanks for sharing.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/17/2011 10:27:00 AM

Can it be that deceit would be in a woman's heart under the moonlight? I always think that is the place we are most vulnerable. A different take Russ on the trickery of relationships. I enjoyed this one.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2011 1:42:00 AM

I think you are the poet who uses short poems alot for the challenges? VERy wise of you, Russell! this one is sure succinct for Tracie's contest!