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Moon-Breeze

lulled heat and moon-breeze — a crow flies in dervish dusk of Autumn sunrise 9/23/2018

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Date: 9/27/2018 12:23:00 PM
Stunning dear, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2018 5:59:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 9/26/2018 10:31:00 PM
O nice word- dervish dusk
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2018 5:59:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 9/25/2018 4:59:00 PM
Great Haiku. Powerful imagery that flows effortlessly off the tongue.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2018 5:46:00 PM
Thank you, W.A.!
Date: 9/25/2018 4:18:00 PM
A wonderful haiku, Kim.. Perfect imagery! Blessings to you..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2018 5:46:00 PM
Blessings to you! Thank you!
Date: 9/25/2018 12:52:00 PM
What a lovely opening line.... Great imagery... Great haiku..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2018 5:47:00 PM
Thank you, Silent!

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