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Mood Change

Moist Autumn- mellow yet melancholy, mists- the betwixt and between, snowy white and green

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Cary Garavaglia

Date: 12/6/2009 1:47:00 PM

NICE!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 12/4/2009 4:03:00 PM

You've captured it beautifully, Brian... 'snowy white and green'...could not be said better - Tim

Marty Owens

Date: 11/28/2009 6:00:00 PM

This is very nice lanterne...Enjoyed...Marty

Elaine George

Date: 11/26/2009 9:27:00 PM

Exactly! Elaine

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/26/2009 9:57:00 AM

Love this melancholy poem....on these wonderful last days of Autumn! And thank you Brian for honoring my poem in your Dear One contest! Congrats to the winners! ~ love, Carrie

Donna Golden

Date: 11/26/2009 9:31:00 AM

Lovely lanterne, Brian! This piece is rich with texture, light, and sensual imagery. Love it. Hugs, Donna P.S. Thanks for honoring me in your contest!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/26/2009 5:19:00 AM

How visually wonderful this Mood Change is.. another fav today.. your imagination grows each time I read another of your creations... I could almost see this happening especially in New Jersey where I am surrounded by nature constantly .. wonderful write this day, Brian... blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/26/2009 3:15:00 AM

Love the picture indeed..Charma

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/25/2009 11:48:00 PM

How I miss the real seasons here in Southern California...you depicted this Fall nicely in your Lanterne. Geetings, Iolanda

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/25/2009 5:39:00 PM

As usual, great imagery Brian! Here in the northeast we're experiencing a similar weather pattern. Peace and love, Audrey

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/25/2009 3:04:00 PM

Thanks for your comment on my poem "Away". Your write here is excellent. I feel that way now concerning the weather for it is betwixt and between here. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/25/2009 11:45:00 AM

I am going to try one of those. You are encouraging me to do so. I don't use many different forms, This is nicely written with beautiful imagery at the same time. Professional write. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours, Caroline.