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Montego Bay Memories

I hear the panting of the feet Like calypso music, breathless and sweet The rhumba playing in the heart And diverse tongues caught by the web of art Same as the mento of the sea Same as the mento of the sea Campbell, Sutta, Cliffy and I Sweet guineps, or mangoes and sun's silver eye Pressed by the weight of enterprise We trafficked dreams, but could not name the prize Poicianna blossoms falling Poincianna blossoms falling Youth then, the sweatless memory Montego Bay, our boyhood bright city And dusty feet, from street to street Where at compassions edge we eat Behold us now bleating with love Behold us now bleating with love And, O, I shall come back again Perhaps to seek, and long for friends in vain Pyaba and his dancers gone But still the bright hibiscus blooms the dawn And withers in the noon day heat And withers in the noon day heat I long to climb the coral cliff I feel the kites excited as they lift The cares of our hearts skyward, free Like parasails now o'er the shining sea And mark the heights our dreams could go And mark the heights our dreams could go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/19/2010 7:43:00 AM
Talk about words making somewhere sound so special, your words sure do talk David. It's as if I am being narrated a description of paradise >> James
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Date: 9/18/2010 11:27:00 PM
Wow! You're poetry is amazing.. Thank u for commenting on mine, but compared to this my poetry is nothing! Amazing!
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Date: 9/18/2010 7:26:00 AM
Awesome delightful poem, David! Loved your use of imagery in this one!..Enjoy your weekend1...Gert
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Date: 9/17/2010 12:30:00 PM
Very descriptive and pleasant reading David.. my husband and I were in Hawaii for three weeks in August and it was as beautiful as your lines.... Italy was even moreso..enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 9/17/2010 11:34:00 AM
A delight to read...enjoyed the incredible imagery, David..Peace, Audrey
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Date: 9/17/2010 9:35:00 AM
Really enjoyed this one - David
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Date: 9/17/2010 8:56:00 AM
David thank you for this magical journey with this beautiful write of yours. Thanks for your comments today as well :) Wilma
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Date: 9/17/2010 8:01:00 AM
Beautifully written poem, David, filled with amazing imagery. I felt like I was right there with you on the shore of Montego Bay, enjoying the music an lovely flowers. Excellent poem, my friend. As for your comments about myths, yes, I am definitely drawn to them and am working on a book of poetry "Legends, Mysteries and Spiritual History." There is so much out there to research for this book. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/17/2010 7:40:00 AM
Haarry Belafonte comes to mind - Jamaica? Sure! But the flow, the unique sensitivity. I played the Belafonte show years ago and became a great fan. So, Be sure I will read more of your superb poetry. Dave
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Date: 9/17/2010 7:36:00 AM
Wonderful write, really loved it, honestly...'But still the bright hibiscus blooms the dawn And withers in the noon day heat'-great lines. This poem brings peace to my heart. Hugs, Emilia
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Date: 9/17/2010 6:17:00 AM
So beautiful! Great write, and thanks for the comments
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