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Montage Meltdown

MONTAGE MELTDOWN Giant killer bird in death struggle with freak girl-flower. Bird combs child’s hair, child smoothes bird feather. Concrete bird-statue being pushed over by tot-vandal pest. Awarded last place in Tidy Garden Contest . Child and her pet swallowed by garden weeds. Legless girl clutches bird for balance needs. Leg-eating flowers attack girl, leave bird intact. Day Of The Triffids, but with droopy daisies in fact. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . NOTE These lines are in the style of newspaper headlines, all possible interpretations of the montage.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/8/2011 3:45:00 AM
lol!!!! Now that is simply WILD. LOVED IT, Sydney. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 4/7/2011 3:16:00 PM
HOW very OR ridge in nal!!! Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
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Date: 4/7/2011 11:53:00 AM
wow, an HM for a short list syd.. congrats! lol... :) huggs
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Date: 4/7/2011 11:26:00 AM
Congratulation on your win Sydney, a very unique take on the montage picture. Awesome creative write...Gautami
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Date: 4/7/2011 8:22:00 AM
Congrats Syd on your HM in Robb's contest ..another great write and win for u to enjoy luv .. a special honor just for u for an exceptional piece ...
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Date: 4/7/2011 8:16:00 AM
Such an interesting take on the contest!! Very original !! Congratulations, Sydney!!
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Date: 4/7/2011 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Robb's contest Sydney. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/7/2011 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Robb, Sydney
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Date: 3/19/2011 5:51:00 PM
Syd ..this is phenomenal luv.. such a unique aspect on the photo interpretation .. a grand entry ..good luck luv..
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Date: 3/19/2011 5:28:00 PM
OMG..completely creative...I love this the best. BG
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Date: 3/19/2011 3:27:00 PM
SO odd? I know the contest LOL, I'm trying too. [Syd please do me a favor read Part 1 When Madness Rides on Moonlight / I am trying to get it all on 1 page rather than 2 and I want to see the pagelayout which I only know how to do from a comment, so comment to please.] Light & Love
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