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Monsoon Night

sheds torrents of tears on my confused forlorn heart bringing gloom within 28 July 2021

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Date: 8/3/2021 4:32:00 AM

Ah, yes, gloom - that dreaded emotion. It is a perfect word for that last line.

Date: 7/29/2021 4:46:00 AM

Beautiful haiku! But gloom doesn't need to linger, hope joy comes back. Love ~ Mala

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/31/2021 7:27:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Date: 7/29/2021 12:08:00 AM

May the torrents of tears turn out pearls of joy by the dawn, for, monsoon comes with mixed feelings, lovely Haiku, Christuraj

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/31/2021 7:27:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Date: 7/28/2021 10:48:00 PM

A powerful grasp in the midst of sadness. Well done C.A.!...ab

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/31/2021 7:27:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Date: 7/28/2021 4:31:00 PM

Love reading your haiku like this one!!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/31/2021 7:26:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Date: 7/28/2021 8:42:00 AM

Nice haiku, Christuraj. I hope the gloom does not linger when the sun comes out again.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/31/2021 7:26:00 AM

Thank you very much.