Monsoon

rain-kissed verdure beams at the truant sun 11.14.2020

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/22/2020 9:19:00 AM

Oh, such succinct beauty, Jo. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/19/2020 2:57:00 AM

Well, at least it stayed green while the sun hid its shine. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2020 2:06:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Jo :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2020 3:15:00 PM

such creative imagery sure deserved a win. Congrats to you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2020 1:20:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this winner. Way to go for the contest. Congrats. Sara

John Watt

Date: 11/14/2020 5:51:00 PM

Love your verdure poem, Jo. A lot of imagery compressed in a single line. Congrats on your win ~ John

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/14/2020 11:29:00 AM

Wonderful, colorful picture, Jo. I love your "truant sun!" Congratulations on your winning placement. Harvest blessings to you!

Silent One

Date: 11/14/2020 9:12:00 AM

Great one liner...

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/14/2020 8:08:00 AM

Hi Jo, Nice imagery! Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/13/2020 10:42:00 PM

Great monoku. ~~