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Monotangled Sense - The Scream

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Sunsets behind you swallow your soul as the beauty disappears

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/28/2023 8:36:00 AM

Very creative, the day has ended tomorrow a new one.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/28/2023 10:43:00 AM

True :)

Silent One

Date: 11/26/2023 10:43:00 AM

Deep thoughts... interesting analogy and nice to see you write this way.. sending you light.. just like sun rise.. always be sun rise... not sun set... a colourful one if you can be... Just dont hide behind clouds.. thats kinda deep isnt it.. lol.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/26/2023 10:55:00 AM

I've done a lot of poems inspired by Edvard Munch art. Every time I look at his art something new jumps out. If you send me light I'll write poems about shadows or burnt retina's haha you should enter the contest. Perhaps have 'be a colourful sunrise' in your back pocket on the off chance you can go deeper :) I have faith