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Monoku three in war

monoku 4 none dance in rainshowers where tears flood the streets

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/28/2024 6:58:00 AM

Sally, you can say a lot with few words. We have been very lucky for the most part here. This essential observation should be plastered on walls everywhere! Joy could be a gift for the world!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/27/2024 11:03:00 AM

That is he time of suffering and grief.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/26/2024 4:11:00 PM

I love the profundity in the simplicity of your words. Well said. Have a splendid evening, hugs, Sara

Sally Eslinger
Date: 5/27/2024 9:26:00 AM

Thank you, Sara. Throughout history tere’s been “wars & ru or of wars” w/all their tragic consequences like death of chilgren. It haunts me. Bless u on this solemn Memorial Day…

Silent One

Date: 5/26/2024 9:05:00 AM

So very true... a deep one liner..

Sally Eslinger
Date: 5/27/2024 9:32:00 AM

Hi, Silent. Thank you for your comment. The horrs of war haunt. From the legacy of Cain & Abel to today, Lost humanity continually losing it!