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Image result for picture of a MOON RISE

Monoku Pick a Picture What Cha See Contest

God painted the moon like a rose for all of us to see!


Heidi Sands

4/8/18


*Placed 2nd in the Monoku pick a picture what cha see contest.  

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May Avatar
April 22, 2018 at 5:28 AM
Congrats on your win Heidi
Callus Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Enjoyed your interpretation of this visual, Heidi. Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul
Sands Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 3:42 PM
Thank you very much Paul :)
May Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 10:15 AM
Wonderful haiku Heidi, best wishes
Sands Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 12:44 PM
Thank you, Joseph :)
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April 21, 2018 at 6:19 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Heidi :) - Great written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 9:25 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise :)
Gentry Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 12:44 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
Sands Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 9:24 AM
Thank you Susan :)
La France Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 5:35 PM
Heidi, this is lovely, best of luck ~
Sands Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 10:43 AM
Thank you BW :)
George   Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 12:45 AM
Simply beautiful, Heidi
Sands Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 6:37 AM
Thank you Elaine :)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 8:05 AM
A pretty poem. Thanks for your visit.
Sands Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 6:37 AM
Thank you Richard :)
Neumann Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 2:20 AM
Great Monoku. And sometimes there is this thing called moon illusion, whatever that might mean...Best wishes, Kai
Sands Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 6:16 AM
Thank you Kai :)
Wigley Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 1:48 AM
Yes, Heidi, isn't God lovely? Thanks for sharing your pretty moon with us. Viv x
Sands Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 6:15 AM
Thank you Viv :) and you are welcome.
Krampe Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 5:32 PM
Nice one, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 5:34 PM
Thank you , Agnes :)
Lindley Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 5:19 AM
Exceptional verse to read my friend. Beautiful and powerful as well. The power of our moon affects far more than just the tides. It greatly affects us in many, many ways, IMHO. How many times , as a kid, did I look up, on a summer night at the full moon and see, that my life would get better in time-- answer, countless times. Moon's beauty, its calming glow, gave hope to me as a child.
Sands Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Hi Robert. You are right. That is so nice to hear it gave you hope as a child. Thank you for your kind comment on this :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:22 PM
Beautiful one liner, Heidi. The pic says it w/a thousand words. Love and smiles.
Sands Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:24 PM
Thank you Freddie :)
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April 9, 2018 at 10:44 AM
enchanting me so, heidi-- a rosette moon!.. huggs
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April 9, 2018 at 12:51 PM
Thank you Nette :) hugs :)
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April 9, 2018 at 7:22 AM
Oh this is so beautiful... hugs :)
Sands Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 7:42 AM
Thank you Akkina! hugs :)
Cunningham Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 6:11 PM
Indeed one of his masterpieces to share with us. Good luck Heidi. Tom
Sands Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 6:26 PM
Thank you Tom :)
Kendrick Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Ahh!! This is a beautiful view. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Sands Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Thank you Sara! :)
Gentile Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 12:46 PM
How lovely, Heidi what a beautiful line, Happy Sunday xxoo
Sands Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Thank you Mike! Happy Sunday :)
Godwin Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 11:31 AM
Simple and sweet is absolutely sweetly simple! Enjoyed. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Sands Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 12:07 PM
Thank you CayCay. Happy you enjoyed this :)
Pandit Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 11:25 AM
Splendid imagery..in poetic words..best for a win, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Thank you Vijay! :)
Trifiatis Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 10:00 AM
True, God painted the Cosmos and the moon for us His art to Enjoy! Beautiful Monoku dearest, Heidi! Good luck!
Sands Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 10:01 AM
Thank you Demetrios! Have a nice day :)
Faulkner Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 9:23 AM
Beautiful visual, a night time rose - take care
Sands Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 9:27 AM
Thank you Michelle :) I hope all is well. Take care.
Michael Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Lovely imagery and message too...A rosy Sun for me and you...All the best Heidi...
Sands Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Thank you Arturo! Have a nice day :)
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