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hello deep winter goodbye autumn falling leaves- a horse snow dancing . . . ___________________ December 20, 2018 Poetry/Monoku/snow dancing Copyright Protected, ID 18-1095-861-0 All Rights Reserved, 2018, Constance La France Originally written for the contest, One Liner- Hello and Goodbye sponsor, Silent One, First Place Submitted to the PREMIER contest Best Monoku - New/old sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke Third Place

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Date: 6/28/2020 2:51:00 PM
this is a adorable. Congrats, Dear Heart.
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Date: 6/23/2020 6:52:00 AM
Beautifully written with perfect imagery:-) Congratulations on your fine win mam. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa
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Date: 6/22/2020 7:02:00 PM
such gorgeous imagery Constance, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/22/2020 2:23:00 PM
This is really beautiful Constance. Love the imagination. Congratulations on your win :) Blessings and love
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Date: 6/22/2020 1:28:00 PM
I love this Constance. I love horses and hope to own one in my next life. Congratulations on your podium win! It is most deserving! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/22/2020 1:10:00 PM
Such a beautiful WINNING monoku, Constance! Janice
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Date: 12/24/2018 4:51:00 AM
- Congratulations, D.H. :) - Merry Christmas ... enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/24/2018 8:57:00 AM
Annie-Lise, Merry Christmas back at you and thanks for the congratulations, appreciate ~
Date: 12/23/2018 8:43:00 AM
so pretty, dear heart!! Hope you are enjoying these days before Christmas. congrats on a great placement.
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Date: 12/23/2018 9:07:00 AM
Andrea, oh gosh my days have been so busy, bet yours are too, thanks so much for the congrats, appreciate ~
Date: 12/22/2018 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations for your top win! :) Merry Christmas !
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Date: 12/23/2018 9:06:00 AM
Heidi, Merry Christmas back at you and thanks so much for the congratulations , appreciate ~
Date: 12/22/2018 12:51:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win top.
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Date: 12/23/2018 9:05:00 AM
Anisha, thanks so much for the congrats, appreciate ~
Date: 12/22/2018 10:37:00 AM
The imagery is stunning, a well deserved top place Dear Heart, kindest thoughts Ann x
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Date: 12/23/2018 9:05:00 AM
Ann, thanks so much for your lovely comment, appreciate ~
Date: 12/22/2018 10:19:00 AM
Exellent, Dear Heart! Sara, I never know what to send Jack. I've tried watches, backpacks, Florida shirts, blankets, etc. He just told me he collects neckties. Maybe this would help you. It's too late for Christmas for he's hidden away the package of gifts I sent for him and Mum. But next time I'll remember to send a necktie to add to his collection for his birthday
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Date: 12/23/2018 9:04:00 AM
Carolyn, thanks for the excellent, appreciate, yes a tie for Jack sounds like a great idea, will remember that ~
Date: 12/22/2018 9:41:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Constance, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 12/23/2018 9:02:00 AM
John, thank you for the beautiful and the congrats, appreciate ~
Date: 12/22/2018 9:21:00 AM
Hi BW, I knew it! Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/23/2018 9:02:00 AM
Alexis, thanks for the congratulations, appreciate ~
Date: 12/22/2018 8:57:00 AM
Wondeful imagery in one line... Great one liner Constance... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 12/23/2018 9:01:00 AM
Silent, thank you for the contest and for my great win, honored to be on your winning list ~
Date: 12/22/2018 7:52:00 AM
Hi BW, This is a good one-liner for the contest theme. Apt for seasonal change as well. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/23/2018 9:01:00 AM
Alexis, thanks for visiting with that nice comment, appreciate ~
Date: 12/21/2018 2:56:00 PM
Now that was beautiful and no doubt a winner...best of luck.
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Date: 12/23/2018 9:00:00 AM
ML, thank you so much for the beautiful and compliment ~
Date: 12/20/2018 8:34:00 PM
Wow!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful verse, Dear Heart..
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Date: 12/21/2018 7:31:00 AM
Eve, thank you for the beautiful ~
Date: 12/20/2018 9:54:00 AM
i don't have a horse and plow but i've a snowblower and have to flatten the driveway so any delivery trucks don't dance in the snow : )
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Date: 12/20/2018 7:18:00 PM
lol Sand, your are so funny !

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