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I walk the dawn sand gentle waves caress the shore sea birds black and white . . . ____________________ March 14, 2016 Poetry/Monoku/sea birds Copyright Protected, ID 16-768-164-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Theme - what I see For the contest, Monoku #9, sponsor, PD Third Place

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/30/2016 2:20:00 PM

Ah! You see the sea birds on a serene beach, Constance! A most lovely image of a new-born day! Congratulations on this merited win:) Regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 3/30/2016 3:11:00 PM

Paul, thanks for visiting my poem today and the nice comment and congratulations!

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 3/30/2016 9:03:00 AM

Congratulations Broken Wings on your remarkable win. You never failed to write a jaw-dropping poem! You truly are praiseworthy! Keep up the good work and continue to enjoy the blessings of words and poetry. :) -HANS

Constance La France
Date: 3/30/2016 3:56:00 PM

Hans thanks for the beautiful comment and congratulations, appreciate ~

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 3/29/2016 3:11:00 PM

Clever play on words and a terrific write and win. Hugs

Constance La France
Date: 3/29/2016 6:26:00 PM

Cecilia, thanks for visiting with the terrific and the clever, I love those words and of course the hugs....

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/29/2016 3:23:00 AM

Brilliant take Broken.. congrats on big win!

Constance La France
Date: 3/29/2016 9:14:00 AM

Upma, thanks for the brilliant and the congrats !

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/27/2016 11:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win:) you have beautifully described the picture:) "caress the shore" - that's great:)

Constance La France
Date: 3/28/2016 8:15:00 AM

Jo, thanks so much for visiting with the congratulations and the beautiful ~

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/27/2016 10:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Broken Wings.

Constance La France
Date: 3/28/2016 8:27:00 AM

Charlie, thanks for the congratulations !

Brian Mcclain

Date: 3/27/2016 5:31:00 PM

Hi Broken Wings, Nice haiku-monoku! Very Zen. Congrats on your contest win! Cheers, Brian

Constance La France
Date: 3/28/2016 8:46:00 AM

Brian, thanks for visiting with the nice comment and congrats, I do love Zen ~

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/27/2016 12:55:00 PM

Beautiful win my lovely friend. Wish you congratulation on your win. Loved always, bl

Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2016 2:11:00 PM

Bl, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations and the love !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2016 12:33:00 PM

A beautiful win for a beauty of a one liner. Congrats

Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2016 2:18:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for the beautiful and the congrats !

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/27/2016 12:01:00 PM

Thank you for the reply... Broken Wings.... Linda

Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2016 2:18:00 PM

Linda, you are welcome!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/27/2016 11:04:00 AM

Hi Constance, Happy easter, Congratulations on your win in the contest. A beautiful Monoku on the picture, the theme. The journey goes on. I Love how so few words can hold the theme, the image inside them. Indeed it is an art to do this. An excellent Monuku Constance. This is a definite seven and i put it in my faves....MIKE.

Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2016 11:06:00 AM

Mike, thanks for the nice comment, the congratulations the excellent, the 7 and the fav, appreciate !

Sathya Babu

Date: 3/27/2016 8:04:00 AM

B.W...Many congrats on this WIN....

Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2016 10:34:00 AM

Sathya, thanks for visiting with the congrats!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/27/2016 4:43:00 AM

Lovely Constance! Congratulations on your top win! ; )

Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2016 10:42:00 AM

Connie, thanks for visiting with the lovely and the congratulations !

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/27/2016 4:32:00 AM

Congratulations for the win ...

Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2016 10:52:00 AM

Probir, thanks for visiting with the congratulations !

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2016 11:57:00 PM

Broken Wings, Congratulations on your awesome WIN. Thank you for supporting my one line verse contest. Stop by my latest blog "Do You See What I See? if you like." Happy Easter. Love LINDA

Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2016 11:04:00 AM

Linda, thanks for the wonderful contest and for my awesome placement, I am honored ~

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/16/2016 2:12:00 AM

I didn't "see" it at first, until I read your comment ... fun wordplay! A very literal approach to what you see in the photo.

Constance La France
Date: 3/16/2016 8:48:00 AM

Timothy, thanks for visiting, I think many would miss the homophone as it is so sneaky, lol !

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/14/2016 11:24:00 AM

I like how you see.

Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2016 4:18:00 PM

Richard, thanks so much for visiting my poem, did you notice the homophone, see/sea !