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Monoku 5 - Cliche

thirty-six twenty-four thirty-six... fit as a fiddle ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Monoku 5: Cliche - Poetry Contest sponsored by the Silent One Friday, January 5th, 2018

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Rhoda Tripp

Date: 1/5/2018 8:11:00 PM

Lol! Only a man would think of this! But I have to admit, I love it! Actually, I'm jealous I didn't think of it!

Mick Talbot
Date: 1/6/2018 8:44:00 AM

Haha, thanks for your kind words Rhoda, appreciated! Wishing you a great 2018... Mick

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/5/2018 9:52:00 AM

A brick house...Stronger than a fiddle...Nice monoku... Blessings to you Mick

Mick Talbot
Date: 1/5/2018 5:14:00 PM

Thanks for taking time out to read my poetry Arturo... and especially for sharing yours, (both music and poetry)! Best new year wishes, Mick

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/5/2018 9:51:00 AM

Lol! My grandmother told me she was taunted by her brother with that chiming over and over, having won the local beauty pageant kept secret from her father. Thank you for the memory! My best to you in the contest :) xomo!

Mick Talbot
Date: 1/5/2018 5:34:00 PM

Haha! I find a lot of contemporary poetry evoke memories, not always happy ones. I am pleased that my monoku evoked a happy one for you. Many thanks for your wishes... Mick