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Weeping Willow and Water Lily Pond

by Claude Monet

a tangled garden with the depth of claude monet- a willow weeping ____________________ May 31, 2018 Poetry/Monoku/my life Copyright Protected, 18-1027-383-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym For the contest, Wow me with a one liner sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/15/2018 10:28:00 AM

A FAVE for me - the emotion you managed to stir up in this one line is awesome. I particularly love how you interchanged the last two words giving much added meaning... and your title gives your one-liner even more importance. Lovely. Congrats on your most deserving win, BW.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2018 8:02:00 PM

The artist in you is in full bloom here. Congrats, Constance. Sorry I have little time to be around here and see your poems. HOping I can be here a bit longer tonight!!

Constance La France
Date: 6/2/2018 8:09:00 PM

Andrea thanks for visiting and for the congrats

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/2/2018 1:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement. Well done!

Constance La France
Date: 6/2/2018 6:56:00 AM

Susan, thank you for the congratulations !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/1/2018 6:06:00 AM

- Congratulations with your one line, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France
Date: 6/2/2018 6:56:00 AM

Sun, thanks for the congratulation and hugs~

Silent One

Date: 6/1/2018 5:17:00 AM

Great choice for a monoku BW... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Constance La France
Date: 6/2/2018 6:57:00 AM

Silent, thanks for the contest and for my awesome placement, appreciate . . .

Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/1/2018 12:53:00 AM

Beautiful... he said that he always wanted to live quietly in a corner of nature...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/2/2018 4:43:00 PM

La Femme à la Robe Verte... Impression, Soleil Levant... Snow at Argenteuil... it's not all about water lilies, check those up... always in nature... the God of impressionism.

Constance La France
Date: 6/2/2018 6:58:00 AM

Pashang, thank you for the beautiful, yes, Monet loved nature and painting flowers, he must have been such a serene person.