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Monk Monk

My son was of that age when Ken dolls were the rage. So I thought maybe one of them would be the thing for him. Long before Christmas day my mom let him play with an old ragged monkey all hairless and really funky. So, Monk Monk came into the family, surviving through many a Christmas for him and two other little seraphim. He was passed child to child and if you really wanted one riled just take that silly Monk Monk and hide him under their bunk. They slept with him and played. At meals he was displayed. Not being a chimpanzee he had to drink their tea. He knew if they misbehave. At night he made them brave. He helped them with the prayer, as they awoke was always there. Yes, poor ragged Monk Monk stored later in a trunk. My wife and I you see just couldn’t break up the family. Maybe one day a grand. will see him and demand, to reincarnate the magic of a Monk Monk from the attic. 14 Dec 2010 For Linda Marie's "Toyland" contest

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Date: 1/5/2011 12:11:00 PM
I can see why this was chosen to be among the best in the contest. This is very imaginatively descriptive with great rhyming. Good one!
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Date: 1/5/2011 5:09:00 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in the "Toyland" contest by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2011 5:02:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Linda, Charles
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Date: 1/4/2011 3:36:00 AM
what a delightful read, charles.. special cheers on your win. :) nette
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Date: 1/3/2011 10:18:00 PM
I remember this one! sure glad to see it on the winners' list, Charles. Congratulations to you. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/3/2011 6:42:00 PM
I think this is lovely, that is how I found my doll I wrote about in my poem that also won in Linda's contest, in an attic chest, congratulations Chaz on your win~~
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Date: 1/3/2011 5:29:00 PM
Fine tale and I loved the wrap up on the last verse. [I bet the grand kids will want it!] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/3/2011 5:20:00 PM
Congrats Charles on your success in my Toyland contest... my winners list finally posted tonight luv...
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Date: 12/23/2010 8:31:00 PM
thankxxx Charles for supporting my current contest... good luck .. and .. happy holidays with luv..
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Date: 12/22/2010 12:24:00 AM
PS. Hmmm, you didn't get my elephant poem, huh ? it's just my elephant is in prison and has fallen in love with Ella, the town garden waterer (elelphant!) well, good night, finally off to bed with me!!
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Date: 12/22/2010 12:23:00 AM
hmmm, so he never got the Ken doll? haha. I never heard of a boy getting a Ken doll. Monk Monk sounds much better. I had a pink bear that grew so worn, Pinky winky And my grandson has his MIMI, the blue bear I gave him seven years ago. And he still cherishes it. I enjoyed reading this becaues today with my grandson , I found out he only wants stuffed animals for Xmas! LUv, andrea Ps Very fun poem!
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Date: 12/15/2010 4:22:00 PM
Oh, I love the tale of Monk Monk, Charles. Maybe he's still in the attic waiting for grandchildren to play with him? Such a cute poem! I'm sure it will be a winner in Toyland. (Would you mind taking a look at the bottom of my last poem and tell me if you see a horse head or just a bunch of squiggly lines. I'm no artist and may take the image off.) Thanks, Charles! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/15/2010 9:07:00 AM
Loved your poem Thanks for your generous support during the year 2010 Looking forward to 2011 My Best Wishes to you Suresh Iyer, India
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Date: 12/15/2010 5:57:00 AM
Wonderful entry recollecting the memories of your son's childhood and expecting one for the grand. Charles, Good luck
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