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Money Not Love

Went to Wal-Mart to buy a Christmas ham All I could find was a giant traffic jam Near the toys__decorations By my calculations Come day after Christmas, dumpsters see cram

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James Peranteau

Date: 12/4/2010 7:10:00 AM

I don't write Limericks, per se'...though I have...yet I love to read them ! This one, (by the way..Hams at Wal-Mart!?)(lol)..reminds me of the Dumpsters at my Condo's ! *smiles*, during the holidays ! much love, james

James Tate

Date: 12/1/2010 5:45:00 PM

Sara, you nailed it here with the Christmas scene. Good show. Glad you liked my poem, Adoptive Mommy.

Adell Foster

Date: 11/30/2010 8:55:00 AM

Congratulations Sara on your much deserved win in Carolyn's contest... I truly enjoyed the read, thank you for your wonderful comments on my poem "Cheaper To Keep Her"... ;-) Many Blessings, Always, Adell

James Fraser

Date: 11/29/2010 2:16:00 PM

Many congratulations on your win Sara with this kool funny poem for Carolyn's contest >> James

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/29/2010 12:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's Contest, Sara! You are so right! Love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/29/2010 5:26:00 AM

Congratulations Sara on your win in the "Commercialized Holiday Humor" contest sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/28/2010 9:28:00 PM

True I'm sure. Congratlations on your win. Love, Joyce

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/28/2010 7:48:00 PM

This sure was a winner Sara. many congratulations for this super win.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/28/2010 6:34:00 PM

CLAP, CLAP for winning well in the contest, sara... awesome! warmest, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2010 4:20:00 PM

I REALLY like this one, Sara. Congraulations on your place in the contest. LUv, Andrea

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/28/2010 4:17:00 PM

yes ytiyu are rught ..I would bet on that too! Congrats to you Sara!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/28/2010 2:10:00 PM

Congratulations on this win for the excellent entry to the contest, Sara

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/28/2010 12:37:00 PM

You wrote a very witty Limerick here, dear Sara. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, iolanda

John Freeman

Date: 11/28/2010 10:26:00 AM

"Went to Wal-Mart to buy a Christmas ham All I could find was a giant traffic jam!" I love that witty expression Sara! "Love or Money, that is the question!" Truth is, concept of mind dwells on money, while precept of heart dwells in Love, God's true wealth! "Congratulations Sara on a worthy poem's recognition. Agape, Moses 1

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 11/28/2010 9:01:00 AM

You must have been there before, Sara. Only the experienced ones have seen the Cram on the Day after Christmas. Great write. Dan C

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/28/2010 7:08:00 AM

That's the way it is, Sara. Dumpsters crammed with unwanted gifts the day after Christmas. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/23/2010 6:21:00 AM

hey you not in a writing mood either?? what about dumpsters she'll cram....?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2010 5:39:00 AM

SOUP MAIL...Sara...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2010 9:48:00 PM

Hey, I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE. I would place it really high! Luv, Andrea

. Dabomb™

Date: 11/22/2010 6:28:00 PM

*grin* thanks for sharing this light hearted limerick which put a smile on my face today!!;)

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/22/2010 10:41:00 AM

As Dr. Ram said, 'very witty and funny', Sara. An excellent Limerick which will be in the winner's circle, I'm sure! Love, Audrey Soup Mail.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/22/2010 9:55:00 AM

Veyr witty, funny and humorous write about money not love, Sara

David Smalling

Date: 11/22/2010 8:13:00 AM

Then Walmart can just pay the city garbage trucks to bring them back for recycling. Love it, Sarah

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/22/2010 7:13:00 AM

So very true Sara. I had a similar experience during the diwali shopping here in India. All the very best for the contest.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/22/2010 6:13:00 AM

You definitely got that right, Sara! Enjoyed reading your Christmas limerick :) hope you're having a good week--nikko :)