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Money and Life

All the gold in Thomaston Is in fancy banks uptown, hun There are two on the square Just waiting to use lair To capture your funds then you're done (Our town is drying up Today I noticed that it only seems that the banks are prospering.)

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James Fraser

Date: 3/12/2011 3:14:00 AM

Sara, the rich are getting richer, and the poor are getting poorer, this is a fact. Where it's going to end, it won't. Crime will increase and anarchy will abound. It's a sad reality for our tomorrows. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/8/2011 6:03:00 PM

Big congrats on your win, Sara! Love, Carolyn

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/8/2011 4:26:00 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win, Sara. Nice going. xxxRalph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/8/2011 11:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your splendid win in John's contest Sara. An honor to be included with you on the winners list with such wonderful poets. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 3/8/2011 9:56:00 AM

Good to see you at the top Sis. Congratulations on a very worthy limerick's honor in second place. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/8/2011 4:27:00 AM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of John, Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/8/2011 4:07:00 AM

It's a sad reality Sara, congratulations on your awesome win in John's contest :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/8/2011 4:03:00 AM

Congrats Sara on your top ten win in the Slapstick Limerick contest my friend.. a great write and win.. enjoy luv..

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/8/2011 12:19:00 AM

To the point and really good Dear. huge congrats for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2011 11:05:00 PM

Yes, this was very good. I think I read it before. Congratulations, Sara!

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/1/2011 6:47:00 PM

Bonnie and Clyde, eh? Or is it Willie Sutton? But I enjoyed this one and the apparent scheming. Regards, Gerard.

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 3/1/2011 8:05:00 AM

Sara, your excellent poem is a bitter truth. There is an adage, 'bankers are the people that lend you an umbrella when the weather is fair and take it back when it rains'. They make rich richer and poor poorer. They are the leaches that flourish by sucking the blood of common man. All economic imbalances are their doing. Who can know better than me. I retired as Chief Executive Officer of a bank. Thank God I am retired now and not a party to their evil deeds. -Mohammad

Afolabi Taiwo

Date: 2/28/2011 3:45:00 PM

You can say that again, the capitalists are everywhere, a good piece and awesome to take notice and comment on it. Thanks again for look in, you know, i am impressed. I am looking forward to reading more of you.

Afolabi Taiwo

Date: 2/28/2011 3:45:00 PM

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2011 11:55:00 PM

hahaha, GOOD limerick humor.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/27/2011 2:27:00 PM

This same thing is happening in lots of small towns, Sara. This would make a great entry for John Freeman's contest if you haven't already written one for it. Great use of dark humor! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2011 1:52:00 PM

Cool write Sara .. very poignant piece as it applies to most all of us where we live in rural areas..luv.. good luck in the contest.. thankxx for your wonderful comments today and always ..