Mondays

Mondays were school days.
Mondays were rule days.
Mondays can be cruel days.

Sundays make me sing
but Mondays bring
open books,
a crooked look from the boss,
leaving crying children
with their first strangers.

The outlook for Monday
might be blue
or overly optimistic.

Moms love Mondays,
circling the day
with a fat red marker.

Moony-eyed Mondays,
for lovers
separated by the weekend.
Their love-mobile
yellow bus, reunites their lips.

Shy Mondays
hide behind rain clouds,
and binders and backpacks,
and inside lockers,
and behind thick glasses.

Fridays make you tingle.
Mondays are the starting line.
The race is on!
You step over the line
and yawn and sip
coffee with reluctance.

Your t-shirt speaks loudly,
“I don’t do Mondays!”
No one hears you.

7/30/2018
Tania Kitchin’s Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 9:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Well done.
Gentry Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 9:57 AM
Congratulations on your win! Creative and very real. Enjoyed.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 1:29 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Smith Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 11:33 AM
You Nailed this one Kim, congratulations...
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 4:11 PM
Thank you, Charlie!
Pett Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 2:55 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Kim, amazing how different people react to Monday’s, well written enjoyed. :))
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 5:48 AM
Thank you, Roy!
Wade Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 2:45 PM
Congratulations on your win. Faux
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 5:47 AM
Thank you, Faux!
Canerdy Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 1:18 PM
I really like this, Kim. CONGRATS! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 5:47 AM
Thank you, sweet Janice,
Kitchin Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 11:44 AM
Very well done, loved the the line about the t-shirt, congratulations on your placement!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 1:11 PM
Thank you!
Brewer Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 3:42 AM
Some impressively acute observations here. Well done, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:43 AM
Thank you, Geoffrey!
Rigoler Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 1:33 PM
Such is how, I believe, most people think of Mondays. I know I do, and I've written a few short poems about it. Many thanks for stopping by. Always nice to hear from you, Kim. / M
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 8:25 PM
You are so talented! Love!
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