Mona Lisa

Humble Olive Eloisa Went one day to work in Pisa She posed for awhile Behind flashy smile She stood in for Mona Lisa. ----------------------------------

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/31/2014 2:35:00 PM

Awww what a fine tribute to a lovely girl. However the smile she has currently in her avatar is a bit more bubbly than Mona Lisa. This was cute.

Paul Callus
Date: 11/1/2014 8:36:00 AM

Mona Lisa's smile is more serious....Olive's smile radiates, on whichever avatar she uploads! Yes, she is lovely and much more. // paul

Robert Nehls

Date: 7/29/2014 2:54:00 AM

Now that is a different take on Mona Lisa. I really enjoyed this one. Very clever, my friend.... Robert.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/29/2014 7:39:00 AM

Thank you Robert. Nowadays with photoshop we keep seeing many variations of the Mona Lisa....why not one of our own lovely Olive Eloisa!! // paul

Dan Prizner

Date: 7/14/2014 8:36:00 AM

Thanks for the poem with a chuckle.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/14/2014 3:51:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it Dan:) and thanks for stopping by. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/13/2014 10:08:00 AM

seeing this one again. I just really love it.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/13/2014 11:50:00 AM

You're welcome, Andrea! ... anytime. :)

Robin Davis

Date: 7/11/2014 8:13:00 AM

Paul A creative and cute write that puts a "smile" in my face. Thank you for the awesome comment on my Friends Dont Give Up poem

Paul Callus
Date: 7/11/2014 4:34:00 PM

Thank you Robin. Glad this put a smile on your face:) / paul

Cherl Dunn

Date: 7/8/2014 6:46:00 PM

Funny man this is right on the money, funny loved it. cheri

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2014 7:57:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it, Cherl. Thanks for stopping by...again! // paul

James Fraser

Date: 6/30/2014 3:18:00 PM

If I was a painter, I'd rather paint Olive Eloisa than the Mona Lisa any day. Nice Limerick Paul, James :)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/30/2014 4:51:00 PM

Thank you James; you are right....that smile of hers is enough to convince me:) Txs for stopping by. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2014 3:30:00 PM

this one is ......... ADORABLE. Hope it is not for bawdy contest because it is just too cute for that one!!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/24/2014 4:27:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! No, it isn't!! Written for a lovely, adorable "girl" whose smile and character are appreciated by many. // paul

Jayne Eggins

Date: 6/20/2014 11:16:00 AM

Big Smile I thought it was wonderful, brilliant job hun...love Jayne x

Paul Callus
Date: 6/20/2014 12:58:00 PM

Thank you Jane! Lovely comments and brilliant smile:) // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 6/15/2014 8:07:00 AM

LOL, good one!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/15/2014 11:49:00 AM

Thank you Jack! / paul

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 6/15/2014 3:43:00 AM

Beautiful Paul... I know Olive love this poem. Verlena :0))s,

Paul Callus
Date: 6/15/2014 11:52:00 AM

Thank you Verlena. A bit of humour can easily convey a lovely message. // paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/11/2014 7:46:00 PM

HAHa wonderful!!!! I can tell from her avatar and her kind words she is a beautiful girl! what a compliment you have send to her. :) awesome

Paul Callus
Date: 6/12/2014 12:17:00 PM

Thank you Casarah! Yes, she is special....not enough adjectives to describe her. She radiates positivity :) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/12/2014 2:03:00 AM

Thank you Casarah,.:) hugs

Tim Smith

Date: 6/11/2014 5:16:00 PM

How fantastic Paul...Love it

Paul Callus
Date: 6/12/2014 12:32:00 PM

Glad it is to your liking, Tim! Thanks for stopping by. // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/11/2014 4:11:00 PM

Dear Paul, for ages people have wondered what Mona Lisa was thinking when she had the strange smirk. I guess da Vinci had to use the stand in for other parts of the painting if she had a "flashy smile." Very witty, my friend! Place give Olive Eloisa my condolences. LOL Love, Carolyn

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/12/2014 2:02:00 AM

Hahaha Carolyn..:) I can only smile..:)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/11/2014 4:42:00 PM

Hi Carolyn! I think Mona Lisa had just been reading Limericks on Soup, while trying to keep her composure!! Hope Olive pops in to pass her own remarks :) This is my last comment for tonight before turning in:) hugs // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2014 2:55:00 PM

Lovely tribute to Olive - she sure is stunning in her beauty and in her wonderful warmth and caring. Hugs Jan xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/12/2014 1:57:00 AM

Thank you Jan...:) I'm humbled by your remarks..:) I have not seen your face but I feel you are a beautiful inside out..:) hugs..:) take care Paul.. Here it's 50 degrees... Weeeeee be hydrated always!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2014 3:34:00 PM

I am sure sure she will Paul. Hope it is cooler when we visit! hugs Jan xxxx

Paul Callus
Date: 6/11/2014 3:20:00 PM

Hi Jan! We had 80 degrees over here today, hot, but fortunately I only live 10 mins away from the beach! // Thank you for the lovely comments; hope Olive pops in again to see them. hugs /x/ paul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/11/2014 2:34:00 PM

OH Olive....what a tribute..me thinks we are all smitten with you! BG

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/12/2014 1:55:00 AM

That's so sweet Barbara..:) thank you and God bless you..:)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/11/2014 3:16:00 PM

Hi Barbara! Thanks for stopping by. I am sure that Olive will appreciate your lovely comments! // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/11/2014 1:13:00 PM

Hahahahahaha I did not expect this one Paul... Lol you made me blush and at same time giggle loools!!! But I like Mona Lisa smile..:D mmmmn intriguing...:D now I know why that change of name is??!!! Loool Olive Eloisa here with one raised eyebrow with smile and wink last.. :D

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/11/2014 2:17:00 PM

hahahaha loool.. :) lol i didn't make a lil smile what it did is one big smile.. :D loools!!! no whips :D only tea.. :D ;),, olive eloisa.. :)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/11/2014 2:04:00 PM

Hi Olive_eloi:) I thought this would put a lil smile on your face. Leonardo Da Vinci sure knows how to choose his models!! Hope no whips after this :)) intriguing huh!:) // paul