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YOU ... small, furry, soft, warm, joyful, sweet little creature, came to me in a shadow ... a time when my heart ran cold, kicked far down the road by sorrow, and lost as any hobo without a compass. I had given hopes and dreams their pink slips ... shown their sorry, deceitful little selves the door, and told them where to put their accursed optimism. Then YOU ... you who had been so neglected and abused by others of my race, others who had seen kittens as something less than themselves ... something for their twisted amusement ... something meant for the focus of their ire and hatred and evil intent ... something at the mercy of the dominion granted them by their so-called "acumen" ... YOU, Sugar ... had come with such a simple name, a name I had every intent of changing to something far more artistic, or worldly, or cute, or extravagant, and yet as the time passed those first days with me, as you worked your gentle, loving, tender, amiable, precious, good-natured way deep into my heart, it was more-and-more evident that whoever had given YOU your moniker, had somehow, through their sinister intent, STILL been unmistakably affected by your pure and precious spirit, and had out-done my best intentions and wholly self-lauded creativity, (as well as trumped my attempts to attach a name to you that others would feel obligated to soak with feigned praise), by giving you a sweet epithet which, in its absolute simplicity and virtue, was nothing less than PERFECT. YOU, my sweet little Sugar, abide the very essence of your name, and you have not only sweetened my days beyond measure, but have saved my life in ways that I'll never be able to impart you. Who knew that the dark clouds of my heart would be rent by such a fuzzy little face of sunshine - that all I needed was a little bit of YOU. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "My Companion And Close Friend That Never Complains" Poetry Contest, Eve Roper, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 5th Place ~ in the "Just A Little Bit Of Sugar Poetry Contest", Debbie Guzzi, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 2/18/2020 12:41:00 PM
Very compassionate and hart warming poem. - Gregory
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/19/2020 4:44:00 AM
That's very kind of you Michael - thank you kindly, my friend! :o)
Date: 2/18/2020 8:13:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest, Greg. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/19/2020 4:44:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Eve, this poem is very special to me for obvious reasons, as is Sugar - the sweetest soul I've ever know. I'd be lost without her - I'm so pleased you liked my poem about her! Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 4/1/2017 1:55:00 PM
Masah an-Nur Greg :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/19/2020 4:43:00 AM
Thank you, Buddy! :o)
Date: 3/1/2017 4:46:00 AM
Oh boy..... is this beautiful! I feel so much feelings I cannot explain (or yes I can, but I won't) just this. Wonderful poetry, shukran!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/22/2017 1:58:00 AM
Thank you VERY much Darren ... your opinion means a lot to me! Sabah alkhyr!
Date: 2/27/2017 1:34:00 AM
This is beautiful. Te way things are, when they are the way they are. Congratulations, Kai
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/27/2017 2:11:00 AM
Thank you, Kai, very much ... I greatly appreciate your comments!
Date: 2/26/2017 4:11:00 PM
Great write. Greg, great win, you're on a roll Sir!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/26/2017 4:28:00 PM
Thanks you kindly, John, very kind words - this one just flowed ... I think the ones we write directly from the heart tend to be the least amount of work, for the most part. Appreciated, my friend. :)
Date: 2/26/2017 12:46:00 PM
A wonderfully touching write Greg.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/26/2017 4:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, James - very much appreciated, my friend!

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