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*Image of Red Rose Bubbles by Pixabay. Mom's Morning Message Sweet Saviour, Praise be thy Holy name for life's Breath on this Blest morning to be amongst the precious living souls that you Created ~~"Wake up *kids and thank God." *Mom's precious living souls ere the world ... 2021 June 11 *1st Place* Waltz Wave Contest ~~Kim Merryman: Judged 2021 June 24 *HMS & PS varied on Blessed, revised to Blest

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/26/2021 11:50:00 AM

William, This touched my heart the first time I read it! Beautifully written! Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/26/2021 12:06:00 PM

My extended courtesies, Kim, for this rare occurrence that you have gifted both me and mom, I am truly honored my friend, Aloha!

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/24/2021 8:36:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... (indeed, we thank God for Moms like yours...)... always instilling in our hearts the love of the Lord. Oh, this makes me nostalgic of my Mom who's now with the Lord. God bless you.

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/24/2021 10:55:00 PM

Your gracious words of generosity are overwhelming, Beata, I know that our moms are watching over us my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2021 4:31:00 PM

this is very very nicely done, William. What a wonderful and well deserved win. Big Congrats to you.

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/24/2021 5:47:00 PM

A hearty thanks, Andrea, her words were verbatim though not as structured, and never brief--she always breaks out in songs, Aloha my friend.