Mom's Apple Pie

The sparkling goodness imprisons an autumn sun
And takes me back to the tender days when I was very young
When I'd help my Mama pluck them off the ground
Tart fallen pippin apples which the warm brisk winds had found
We'd stack them in her apron hammock bed
And when we'd gathered enough, into the house we'd head
Right to the kitchen sink to sort, and wash
And I would stand upon a chair to watch
Then gently laid on a towel, they'd shine till they were gleaming
We'd sit, and chat,  she'd peel and we'd talk about every little thing
She would open the Crisco can, and the flour canister
And soon, before my very eyes, the pie dough would appear
She would roll the dough, and let me have a try
She would break off a piece for my miniature pie...
Side by side, she would show me how
Her patience was amazing....as I struggled to follow
The petals of peeled slices, layered out into rows
Sprinkled with her spices, added sugar and butter bows
Popped carefully into a piping oven, not quite an hour or so...
We'd watch them turn a golden brown...filling up my nose
With a cinnamon sweet fragrance, that would make my child's mouth drool
She would finally remove them, hot and gold,  slightly letting them cool
Would top their goodness with heaping mounds of vanilla ice cream too!
Ahhh....sweet are the memories of those awesome pie ala modes...
Are you watching me Mom?...on those autumn days when I have shown
My grandchild how to peel, and slice, and roll, and bake her own??....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's Dreamy Desserts contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 3:30 PM
This is a wonderful poem. Congratulations on your win. Theere are three of us bunched together who brought apple pie to the potluck. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
K. Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 3:25 PM
This is such a lovely write, Carrie :)I can almost smell that gorgeous cinnamon and apple smell--mmm --congrats on your win! :)-nikko :)
Sweetheart Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 1:27 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in my contest ..this is very warm to the heart and the story line is impeccable.. thankxxx for supporting my contest..with luv..Linda-Marie
Brown Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 8:05 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Carrie. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with love and inspiration. I love how you write of your memories old and new. They are always so interesting to read.Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 6:06 PM
A fine expression to recollect the memories of the past. I always enjoy apple pie- my favorite. Good luck
Guzzi Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 5:24 PM
I remember doing this with my Aunt Ester..ahhhhh such fond memories..thanks for all your sweet support. Light & Love
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June 2, 2010 at 3:27 PM
Delicious!! One of my favorite desserts and no one made it like my mother (and perhaps yours, too). Crisco is essential to getting that flaky crust. The store bought apple pies taste yucky by comparison, but now I'm thinking of taking out mom's old recipe and giving it a try. Love this poem! Brings back wonderful memories. Love, Carolyn
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June 2, 2010 at 2:26 PM
Oh Grandma..how sweet this is. On thing stuck me ..my mom used her apron for everything..i can still see her carrying veggies from the garden to the house. BG
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June 2, 2010 at 1:46 PM
That did the trick, Im comming to your house for coffee and apple pie lol....well written and good luck in contest...always Michael
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