Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Mom's Apple Pie

When it comes to the aroma of mom’s apple pie
Even the windchime outside tingles with glee
My lips quiver as I take my first bite
Fondling my fork in anticipation

Exuding its tantalizing fruity bouquet
Oohing and aahing every guest raves
It’s unanimous the flavor’s exquisite
Bravissimo kisses for our Queen Hostess



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on November 23, 2019 for contest SMELL SOUND TASTE TOUCH REPEAT SENSE sponsored by SHERI FRESONKE HARPER  -  Honorable Mention

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Na Na December 21, 2019 at 10:41 PM Congrats on your winning poem Lin Line Gauthier December 22, 2019 at 12:05 AM Thank you so much, Gregory.

Sheri Fresonke Harper December 21, 2019 at 7:33 PM Congratulations Line, for your honorable mention place in the smell sound taste touch contest--showing up last is no indication of overall status. I enjoyed the sensual experience you offer. Thanks for entering. Line Gauthier December 22, 2019 at 12:06 AM Thanks for the fun contest, Sheri.

M. L. Kiser December 1, 2019 at 10:54 AM I want some. "Even the windchime outside tingles with glee", love this. Line Gauthier December 1, 2019 at 11:02 AM Thanks, ML. Most appreciated.

Kai Michael Neumann November 25, 2019 at 12:02 PM Can you send me a slice or two. I can taste it ... Line Gauthier November 25, 2019 at 6:05 PM On its way. Thanks, Kai.

Caren Krutsinger November 25, 2019 at 12:52 AM There is NO pie as wonderful as Mom's pie! Well done. I am salivating now. Line Gauthier November 25, 2019 at 1:26 AM Yum.

M. L. Kiser November 24, 2019 at 6:59 PM This is so easily visualized. Well done and good luck in the contest. Line Gauthier November 24, 2019 at 8:47 PM Thanks, ML, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Panagiota Romios November 24, 2019 at 8:14 AM Excellent, line My best wishes for you in the Contest Line Gauthier November 24, 2019 at 9:50 AM Thanks, Panagiota. Much appreciated.

Na Na November 24, 2019 at 12:35 AM Hi Line wonderful poem and best of luck in the contest. My moms pie was Strawberry. it was amazing. Thanks for sharing Line Gauthier November 24, 2019 at 12:52 AM Strawberry pie sounds delightful. My mom loved to bake and she had a million "best" desserts.

Maria Williams November 23, 2019 at 11:28 PM You certainly know how to get the taste buds dancing. Smell, Sound Taste and Touch You've got it all Line. Your Mum's apple pie sounds wonderful. All the best in the upcoming contest....Maria Hugs Line Gauthier November 24, 2019 at 12:53 AM Thanks, Maria. Most appreciated.