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Mom's Apple Pie

When it comes to the aroma of mom’s apple pie Even the windchime outside tingles with glee My lips quiver as I take my first bite Fondling my fork in anticipation Exuding its tantalizing fruity bouquet Oohing and aahing every guest raves It’s unanimous the flavor’s exquisite Bravissimo kisses for our Queen Hostess Submitted on November 23, 2019 for contest SMELL SOUND TASTE TOUCH REPEAT SENSE sponsored by SHERI FRESONKE HARPER - HONORABLE MENTION

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Na Na

Date: 12/21/2019 10:41:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem Lin

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/22/2019 12:05:00 AM

Thank you so much, Gregory.

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/21/2019 7:33:00 PM

Congratulations Line, for your honorable mention place in the smell sound taste touch contest--showing up last is no indication of overall status. I enjoyed the sensual experience you offer. Thanks for entering.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/22/2019 12:06:00 AM

Thanks for the fun contest, Sheri.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/1/2019 10:54:00 AM

I want some. "Even the windchime outside tingles with glee", love this.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/1/2019 11:02:00 AM

Thanks, ML. Most appreciated.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 11/25/2019 12:02:00 PM

Can you send me a slice or two. I can taste it ...

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/25/2019 6:05:00 PM

On its way. Thanks, Kai.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/25/2019 12:52:00 AM

There is NO pie as wonderful as Mom's pie! Well done. I am salivating now.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/25/2019 1:26:00 AM

Yum.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/24/2019 6:59:00 PM

This is so easily visualized. Well done and good luck in the contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/24/2019 8:47:00 PM

Thanks, ML, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/24/2019 8:14:00 AM

Excellent, line My best wishes for you in the Contest

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/24/2019 9:50:00 AM

Thanks, Panagiota. Much appreciated.

Na Na

Date: 11/24/2019 12:35:00 AM

Hi Line wonderful poem and best of luck in the contest. My moms pie was Strawberry. it was amazing. Thanks for sharing

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/24/2019 12:52:00 AM

Strawberry pie sounds delightful. My mom loved to bake and she had a million "best" desserts.

Maria Williams

Date: 11/23/2019 11:28:00 PM

You certainly know how to get the taste buds dancing. Smell, Sound Taste and Touch You've got it all Line. Your Mum's apple pie sounds wonderful. All the best in the upcoming contest....Maria Hugs

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/24/2019 12:53:00 AM

Thanks, Maria. Most appreciated.