Moments Before the Storm

"...... define the moment or the moment will define you." Quote By -Walt Whitman
clouds s i g n a l authority tree s u g g e s t s acceptance sky s e n s e s ambivalence fields s p e a k appreciation birds s h o w agitation man s e e k s asylum June 8, 2023 Constance La France / Writing Challenge, D Quotes
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June 17, 2023 at 6:45 AM
Reason, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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June 21, 2023 at 7:58 AM
thanks, Constance. I appreciate you.
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 1:15 PM
oh so cool how you did this. And I see it's a win. Congrats to you
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June 21, 2023 at 8:02 AM
Thanks, Andrea; The form is called a brevette 3 lines with word each = noun, verb (spaces in the spelling) and noun. Nice brevity. I was defining a picture (ekphrasis). I HAD to add a bit of alliteration.
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June 11, 2023 at 1:56 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your creative write. Have blessed day/week...........
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June 11, 2023 at 2:58 PM
thanks, Paula, it was a fun form with which to work...The teacher in me still looks to experiment with words and see what they can do. I appreciate your comment.
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