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Moments Ahead

Life provides all the drama I need From Britain's Queen To the College Dean If you think I serve you purpose Get to know the insides, Don't judge by my surface I'm not here to fill your time I'm here to make the most of mine So if you want to be here that's cool If not, fix yourself, I brought a bag of tools I'm not here to fix you or diss you Not about fixing flaws or telling you what to do I'm here to enjoy the moment Not sure how many are ahead I'm gonna enjoy them all before I'm dead

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Christine Phillips

Date: 8/15/2013 6:16:00 AM

Nice realistic piece. Keep on writing and reading.

Yours Truly

Date: 8/4/2013 12:14:00 AM

Spoken like a true realist! :) love your work Sharon. You create to inspire and inspire to create. Much love -Yours Truly

Lynn Dolly
Date: 8/9/2013 8:46:00 PM

Thank you, Yours Truly. Glad you liked it. Cheers, Sharon

Danesh Morgan

Date: 7/30/2013 12:11:00 AM

man this is how its told, from front to back, as good as you get, believe me, i got that!

Lynn Dolly
Date: 7/30/2013 1:29:00 AM

yep yep ;) Cheers, Sharon

Wayland Bunch

Date: 7/28/2013 3:44:00 PM

Well al little more combative this one is and probably won't recieve a lot of favor, lol. I guess I'll call it the chicken little effect, not sure if you're familiar but in one version he was struck by a falling acorn, pecan whatever, and he told everyone the sky was falling lol. Sometimes a few darts may seem like a few thousand hitting places they weren't intended. I guess that's the power of words, or the weakness of perception. Thanks for the inspiration again.

Lynn Dolly
Date: 7/30/2013 1:32:00 AM

;) No problemo!