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Moment Stolen In Time Beside Me Lay

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As I stand by the kitchen window I must say My chin against my chest spent from working all day Warm wet soapsuds adhere to my hands as I pray Washing the seasoned tableware, running away Unfasten thoughts of daily drudgery workday An incredible tranquil moment sets at bay As I gaze out and see the caramel gateway The sun’s glow starts to wane at a distance array Warm honey caramel bathed yard melting a way Freezing out my emotions from the day to day Reality dream walking through a hue archway A fond moment stolen in time beside me lay 1/15/2017

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Mark Martin

Date: 1/31/2017 2:10:00 PM

Love the contrast between the two stanzas - drudgery and beauty. Congratulations Eve! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2017 8:06:00 PM

glad to see this one again though in my eyes, it's a even better than the placement you gto.Congrats, Eve.

Eve Roper
Date: 1/28/2017 9:57:00 PM

Thank you :') I couldn't ask for a more inspiring compliment Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2017 8:06:00 PM

and that picture was so inspiring

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 1/28/2017 4:40:00 PM

Calm and evening serenity. That is what I feel when I read this monorhyme. Well written. Congrats. a 7.

John Hamilton

Date: 1/28/2017 11:17:00 AM

Beautiful write Eve, if not for repeating day three times this would have been number 1, congrats anyway on a fine placement.

Joseph May

Date: 1/27/2017 7:44:00 PM

Beautiful write Eve..Congrats on your win

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/27/2017 6:26:00 PM

A beautiful Monorhyme with lovely imagery, Eve. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 1/20/2017 12:29:00 PM

Such a lovely monorhyme, Eve. I love the 'warm honey caramel' atmosphere which you create. It would be a pity were moments such as this one to go to waste! Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2017 8:48:00 PM

wow, you took that picture and used it for a beautiful monorhyme. Very nice, Eve!!

Eve Roper
Date: 1/17/2017 8:59:00 PM

I didn't enter the Nette's contest, but I saw the picture and reminded me of my window in my kitchen.. Thank you

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/17/2017 8:44:00 PM

Beautiful images in this one!

Eve Roper
Date: 1/17/2017 8:59:00 PM

Thank you, Kim :)

Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/16/2017 11:54:00 PM

Wow...you captured the joy of the moment so beautifully, Eve. "Warm honey caramel bathed yard melting a way," is such a lovely line. A 7

Eve Roper
Date: 1/17/2017 9:00:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Afzal, :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/16/2017 3:55:00 PM

wow Eve I hope this is for John's contest its a lovely flowing monorhyme and the imagery is beautiful I especially love that caramel gateway:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper
Date: 1/16/2017 4:36:00 PM

Hello, Jan, this is for John.. but I'm getting shy over my writes. Thank you so very much for your wonderful presence and your inspirational compliment.