Mombasa

Beautiful white sands welcome my feet
into the ocean, with their soft, wet, coarse
sensation. The ocean is warm and cool
at the same time. It tempts me to stay
longer without uttering a word. Its
temptation, I swear it, is stronger
than girls in bikinis, who want to have fun.

The Mombasa people too tempt you to stay;
they call you "brother", "sister,"  "son",
"daughter".....though you are a stranger.
They smile at you without any scorn,
slyness, or expecting anything in return.
Their smile is natural and innocent.

They serve you a cup of tea
without asking for it,
and offer you a seat. They ask about
your journey, home and destination. You feel
as though you had met in a past life.

"You have met God!" people tell me
when I return to the city.


"I found Him in Mombasa," comes my response.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Haikutwinkle Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 9:48 PM
This tells a wonderful story ...lovely to read
Kimathi Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 2:32 AM
Thank you so much Angeline!! *^_^*
Rodgers Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 5:34 PM
Well said. I was in Tanzania once but never made it to the coast and Mombasa. But I did see the ocean as we watched the sin rise from Gilman's point on Mt Kilimanjaro.
Kimathi Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 6:02 PM
I'm sure you must have really enjoyed yourself... Thanks Dave, for reading and commenting on my work!!! ;-)
Neumann Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 3:34 AM
I enjoyed that read. It is so gentle and yet so thought provoking. Whatever God means, I am sure she resides in Mombasa.
Kimathi Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 8:19 AM
Thanks so much Kai, for your kind comment, and enjoying my piece!! :-)
Sietesantos Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 1:25 PM
This is so beautiful, Teddy! It warmed my heart to know that such wonderful, unspoiled people still exist! I am glad you paid tribute to them in this lovely piece! Pandita
Kimathi Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 5:33 PM
Thank you so much for enjoying this piece, Pandita!! ;-)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 2:49 AM
Teddy, coming here and reading this tremendous piece is a highlight of my time at the soup this morning.
Kimathi Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 7:05 AM
Oh, thank you so much for your kind comment, Richard!! ;-)
Martin Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 8:08 PM
Great descriptive poem,nearly makes me want to pack my bags and head off, Very well written, enjoyed.
Kimathi Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 2:17 AM
Welcome to Mombasa, Paul. It's in Kenya. I'm sure if you come, you'll never want to leave, lol. Thanks for enjoying my piece!! ;-)
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