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Molten Lightning

While thunder rolls over the scene: lightning bolts, ignite tinder trees. Plummeting drops douse the ground fires: but, torched by cinders, the trees' crown. Suety smoke inks ebon clouds; while thunder rolls over the scene. Terrified of loud thunderstorms, critters flee the stench of burnt wood. Strong gusts morph into swirling winds lofting plumes of hot embers high. While thunder rolls over the scene, molten lightning lights up the sky. Dwindling fuel feeds fire's demise; when the wind shifts upon itself. Forest fires die out over time, while thunder rolls over the scene.
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Roper Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 9:04 PM
Fantastic verse with great imagery and feel.
Pinet Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 7:11 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 6:09 AM
such vivid imagery and I love the pic too, thanks for the inspiration for the contest Emile:-) hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:18 AM
Thanks Jan, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Ermine Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 4:49 PM
Clearly a master a vivid description, Emile. A fine egsample of your refined capability. Infused with skill, the fire's characteristics are here, all here.
Pinet Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 6:37 AM
Thanks Sigrid, I appreciate you comments my friend, Emile.
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