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Quatern
A Quatern is a sixteen line French form composed of four quatrains. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two third line of stanza three and fourth line of stanza four. A quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme. line 1 line 2 line 3 line 4 line 5 line 6 (line 1) line 7 line 8 line 9 line 10 line 11 (line 1) line 12 line 13 line 14 line 15 line 16 (line 1)

Lipogram
A lipogram is a composition from which the writer systematically omits a certain letter or certain letters of the alphabet.

While thunder rolls over the scene, molten lightning strikes tinder trees. Plummeting drops drown out ground fires, but set by cinders, the tree's crown. Suety skies ink ebony clouds, while thunder rolls over the scene. Terrified of such summer storms, critters flee the smell of burnt flesh. Sudden gusts, fueled by hot spots, lift plumes of burning embers high. While thunder rolls over the scene, lightning tries to ignite the sky. Breezes force fire's smokey demise when the wind shifts upon itself. For most forest fires fizzle out while thunder rolls over the scene. (Quatern/Lipogram No Letter "A") 08/18/2020

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Date: 9/6/2020 9:04:00 PM
Fantastic verse with great imagery and feel.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/7/2020 7:11:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/27/2020 6:09:00 AM
such vivid imagery and I love the pic too, thanks for the inspiration for the contest Emile:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/27/2020 7:18:00 AM
Thanks Jan, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/18/2020 4:49:00 PM
Clearly a master a vivid description, Emile. A fine egsample of your refined capability. Infused with skill, the fire's characteristics are here, all here.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/19/2020 6:37:00 AM
Thanks Sigrid, I appreciate you comments my friend, Emile.

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