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While thunder rolls over the scene, bolts of lightning strike tinder trees. Plummeting drops douse most ground fires; but set by hot cinders, tree's crown. Suety skies ink ebon clouds; while thunder rolls over the scene. Terrified of these thunderstorms; critters flee the smell of burnt flesh. Strong gusts, combined with swirling winds, lift plumes of burning embers high. While thunder rolls over the scene, molten lightning ignites the sky. Dwindling fuel brings fire's demise; when the wind shifts upon itself. For forest fires die over time; while thunder rolls over the scene.

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Date: 9/6/2020 9:04:00 PM
Fantastic verse with great imagery and feel.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/7/2020 7:11:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/27/2020 6:09:00 AM
such vivid imagery and I love the pic too, thanks for the inspiration for the contest Emile:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/27/2020 7:18:00 AM
Thanks Jan, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/18/2020 4:49:00 PM
Clearly a master a vivid description, Emile. A fine egsample of your refined capability. Infused with skill, the fire's characteristics are here, all here.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/19/2020 6:37:00 AM
Thanks Sigrid, I appreciate you comments my friend, Emile.

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