Molly Ii (Madeline)

Molly II (Madeline)

Madeline helped Molly stand,
On her own,
She was too weak…

They gazed at Sara,
In pools of blood,
Lying at their feet…

SHHHHH

Speak not of me,
And do not laugh,
Cast your stare aside…

From behind the pads,
Of darkened room,
And leather jacket tight…

Molly focused all her thoughts
On days,
That lay ahead…

She nodded constantly,
With deceptive smiles,
At all the doctor said…

Hand in hand,
In friendship found,
Together they walked the street…

Madeline from behind the mask
Molly,
In too deep…

Molly opened up,
Her blue eyes,
Wide with terror…

In her dreams,
She lost herself,
And found Madeline’s lair…

Trapped behind,
The doors of hate,
In the recess of their mind…

Molly realized,
Far too late,
To fear Miss Madeline….

Madeline,
With twisted face,
Drove the dagger deep…

Screaming bloody murder,
At the man,
Crumbled in the street…

With no remorse,
She glided back,
Gone without a care…

Molly fell to her knees,
In disbelief,
“What had happened here?”

Molly gazed upon,
The corpse,
At his dead eyed stare…

She heard the laughter,
In her mind,

“I am Sara’s sister, dear!”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 9/25/2009 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 9/24/2009 2:28:00 PM
Sounds like something out of a Hitchcock movie. Interesting style. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:54:00 PM
Evets, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 9/24/2009 8:29:00 AM
Dear Evet, Congratulations on your well deserved feature of the week. Love and Light, Lainie.
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Date: 9/24/2009 4:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Evets. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2009 10:47:00 PM
Evets - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 4/1/2009 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on the featured write "Molly II (Madeline)." Hope all is going well with you. Have a great day. Vince
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Date: 3/31/2009 2:46:00 PM
Dear Evets,Congratulations on YOUR POEM "Molly ll (Madeline) being Featured this week Fantastic and morbid well writtenALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/30/2009 9:56:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week with this frightening but well written piece. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/30/2009 5:10:00 PM
Creepy. Congrats on a well deserved featured write! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/30/2009 2:59:00 PM
Scary! Sounds like something out of a horror movie. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 1/15/2009 12:17:00 AM
And the terror continues in the second installment. You have a way with words...Raul
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