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Mollie

My mother, a simple life, a simple face Old before her time, overworked and burdened Living a life she never complained about, Lightening our load while bearing hers Innocent, free of envy, malice or regrets Every year, her rose blooms again in spring note: for some reason I cannot bold the first letters..sorry

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Tammy Reams

Date: 4/12/2015 9:32:00 AM

Sorry I'm late on this Barbara, congrats on your win. Thank you for entering my contest.

Constance La France

Date: 4/6/2015 6:16:00 PM

Barbara, congratulations on your wonder win with this beautiful tribute to your mother, 7, the bolding is a tricky thing for sure

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/6/2015 12:22:00 PM

Beautiful poem in tribute of your dear mother. Barbara. Congratulations on your win. Sandra

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 4/6/2015 12:26:00 PM

thank you so much. Appreciate your kind words. BG

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/6/2015 9:35:00 AM

Congratulations. The presentation is very symbolic. No bold letters, just simple font, as the noble woman, your mother. A 7.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 4/6/2015 12:25:00 PM

thank you Kim...Your sweet words touched me. BG

Mohan Chutani

Date: 4/6/2015 12:57:00 AM

A lovely tribute to a mother who worked hard and loved everyone. Congrats BG. Mohan

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 4/6/2015 12:24:00 PM

Thank you, I appreciate the kind words. BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2015 9:14:00 PM

Barbara, glad you won without the letters bolded because this is so sweet. Congratulations. (do you know that you have to put the symbol for bolding around each and every first letter of each line?) I was glad my mom's name was so short!