mojave

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Summer haiku

incessant buzzing distant blur heat waves rising cracked lips croak, “water”.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2024 9:59:00 AM

I like yours a lot, Crystol. So descriptive

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/2/2024 11:03:00 PM

Amazing desert- Mojave. Congratulations dear poet.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/2/2024 4:39:00 PM

Crystol, congratulations on your winning placement, a creative one.

Crystol Woods
Date: 7/2/2024 6:45:00 PM

Ty! Lovely contest!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/27/2024 10:44:00 AM

Senses touched! Love it, Crystol!

Crystol Woods
Date: 7/1/2024 11:26:00 AM

That's great, thank you for taking time to tell me! Xo

Karen Croft

Date: 6/27/2024 9:00:00 AM

Love your haiku

Crystol Woods
Date: 6/27/2024 9:02:00 AM

Tysm!