Notes About The Poem

Dreamy Silhouette

- Moisture Gently Kissing Your Glowing Sunlight -

When you have a beautiful beaming dream enter 
the mouth smiles as together we drift away
As a moon face gets brighter accepting new beginnings 

Flowers sway in your breathless air synchronized 
by the spring music warmly breathing out sighs 
Softly sunshine lifts our spirits free 

Walking upon the yellow brick 
road joining hands fingertips hold intertwining swans forever mate 
Beauty on wings regal passion poesy on silk flowing sheets 
 
Floating warmly dancing butterflies skip 
under the tenderness softly embracing 
Sharing sweet fluttering  kisses from early morn unto late night

Heartbeats skip into one fire joining souls 
in  flowery band of white anemones binding us together one garland 
Under a bridge bending heaven's sunshine colour baptised love










A Collaborated Poem 05.04.2016
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid :)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Arnone Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 10:04 AM
Beneficial collaboration. Nice flow and rhythm. Words in sentences appear jumbled (as if AI chosen); but, simultaneously, expertly placed (if that makes any sense).... :-)
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May 7, 2016 at 11:42 AM
- Thank you for reading and comments, Tom :) - I greatly appreciate your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 11:10 AM
My dear friends, Anne Lise and Liam, a glowingly beautiful poem of love! A super 7 Thanks a lot for sharing! love lots and hugs, Leonora
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 11:27 AM
- Glad you liked it, dear Leonora - Thanks for friendly visits a super 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Madonsela Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 9:14 AM
Very uplifting , thanh you for sharing **RON**
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 11:42 AM
- Glad you liked it, Ronny - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Madonsela Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 9:14 AM
Thank
Van Der Schyf Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 6:53 AM
Nice one. I really enjoyed it
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:47 AM
- Thank you for reading and comments, Owen :) - I greatly appreciate your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 1:28 AM
you made me swoon again, anne and liam!...how endearing!.huggs
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:46 AM
- Nette, thank you for reading and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 1:21 PM
You two painted a very pleasant and romantic picture...very moving
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 1:42 PM
- I greatly appreciate your visit :) - Tim, thank you for reading and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dalei Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 11:07 AM
Hi Anee, It's superb. Entire piece is enriched with English literature.You painted very brilliantly the beauty of nature.Thanks a lot for enhancing our pleasure.............hugs
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 12:56 PM
- Manmath thank you for reading and comments, I greatly appreciate your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 10:59 AM
Anne Lise and Liam, a beautiful write, and I am loving it 7 ~
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 11:33 AM
- B.W. a new co-write by Liam and me :) - Thank you for reading and comments, greatly appreciate your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 9:11 AM
Another beautiful poem by the both of you. You've done it so much you have become the same thought. I really enjoyed this one. Great write for both. Peace:)
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 11:32 AM
- A new co-write by Liam and me, Daniel :) - Thank you for reading and commet it, greatly appreciate your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Alhemaidy Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 5:58 AM
Lovely indeed!
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 6:18 AM
- Thank you for reading and commet it, greatly appreciate your visit Abdullah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 2:14 AM
Excellent. Beautiful romantic poem. I like it. Thanks for sharing it.
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 5:13 AM
- A new co-write by Liam and me :) - Thank you for reading and comment it, greatly appreciate your visit Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Underwood Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 9:20 PM
A lovely romantic write
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 5:12 AM
- A new co-write by Liam and me :) - Thank you for reading and comment it, greatly appreciate your visit Gail :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 5:48 PM
your ink flowed beautiful in this anne lise thank you dear pal for the pleasure of joining pens wishing you a blessing of a week
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 5:14 AM
- Thank you dear friend Liam :) - ............ love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Martin Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 3:47 PM
Simply beautiful! So romantic--So very well done. Sorry have not been around lately and am now happily back!
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 5:12 AM
- A new co-write by Liam and me :) - Thank you for reading and commet it, greatly appreciate your visit Thomas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Inundation of love in two beautiful hearts floating in that. Excellent poem my lovely lovely friend. A sweet 7 sure. Loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 5:12 AM
- A new co-write by Liam and me :) - Thank you for reading and commet it, greatly appreciate your visit Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 2:46 PM
Enjoyed reading your collaboration with Liam..Way to go you two..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 5:11 AM
- A new co-write by Liam and me :) - Thank you for reading and commet it, greatly appreciate your visit Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 2:35 PM
Hi Anne- Lise n' Liam !:))Wow!!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each! Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 5:10 AM
- A new co-write by Liam and me :) - Thank you for reading and commet it, greatly appreciate your visit Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 2:22 PM
oh such stunning imagery Anne Lise this is absolutely beautiful:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 5:10 AM
- A new co-write by Liam and me :) - Thank you for reading and comment it, greatly appreciate your visit Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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