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Model Bunny

‘ ‘’’’’’’’’’ ‘ ‘ Weighing scale breaks for a gal too plump Nibbling chocolates instead of carrot sticks, “I want to be a model, why is life such a dump?” So off to the gym she heads for a quick fix, fix! Her waist still a round 31- inches after months Of high fatty food she can’t scratch on her note, Auditions call, she’s craving to fit into slim pants With more Easter honey making her bloat, bloat She meets a retired, old magician who can nail it At last, curved figure she’ll have without big tummy, Swoosh! He pulls her from wrapped cage like a rabbit And swirls, turning poor gal into a fake Playboy bunny! © For Carol Brown’s Bunny Rabbit by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/4/2012 9:06:00 AM
Nette, congrats on your bunny win! Rhonda :)
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:22:00 PM
NETTE... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 3/2/2012 3:06:00 PM
Nette, I really enjoyed this work. Well done, as usual. Congrats on making Carol's winners' list............................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 3/1/2012 12:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely bunny tale win xx
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Date: 2/29/2012 2:25:00 PM
wow..now that's some magic Congrad's on your hoppi' good win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/29/2012 10:12:00 AM
cxongrats Nette luv on a fantastic win for this adorable write on miss model bunny luv.. sweetly visual and grand ..
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Date: 2/29/2012 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on the win. LOL.
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Date: 2/29/2012 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning piece and thank you for supporting my "Bunny Rabbits" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2012 8:32:00 AM
Fascinating, Nette. I love how you put philosophy inside this poem. :D
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Date: 2/27/2012 1:33:00 PM
Oh my! Princess, your King is chuckling big time this wonderful Monday evening in the Kingdom of Scotland. Good luck in Carol's fine contest with this humorous piece :) xxxx
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Date: 2/27/2012 7:51:00 AM
Thank you Nette for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 10:29:00 PM
nice nice..... good luck in the coontest...pd
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Date: 2/26/2012 3:56:00 PM
Nice Bunny write! [nette use YOUR OWN 4 lines re: Et cetera Contest] Light & Love
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Date: 2/26/2012 2:28:00 PM
Ha ha, this is a really good and humorous write Nette! I understand the seriousness of the poem, but it was said in a light tone and the ending is just too funny! This is a wonderful poem my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/26/2012 1:44:00 PM
Cute one for the contest..Reads like winning material..Enjoyed the chuckle..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2012 1:25:00 PM
very well done babe, lifes a battle till its won, everythin makes me fatter some:)
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Date: 2/26/2012 11:52:00 AM
Hi Nette,this is a very cute write from you.I am enjoying the entries of this contest.Carol will like it.Best wishes.(12:15 A).
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Date: 2/26/2012 11:00:00 AM
Loved this Nette all the best in the contest , Hugs and best wishes , Declan ...
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Date: 2/26/2012 10:45:00 AM
I love my chocolate too! no carrot sticks for me. creative take on the contest :) also, i did write grainy photos for your contest but I was away without internet and missed it :(
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Date: 2/26/2012 10:42:00 AM
oh such a cutie Nette luv great idea to make her a model diva bunny luv.. good luck in contest.. Carol will be smiling ..happy Sunday too..
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Date: 2/26/2012 9:38:00 AM
Carol will love this!!!!! A- plus perfect write ..... love n hugs Michael
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Date: 2/26/2012 9:09:00 AM
Hmmm, I want to see what this fake playboy bunny looks like!! Cute tale, and I like how it was a female human bunny. A different take on a bunny tale!! How are you, Nette? I haven't seen you in a little while! (by the way, 31 inch waist is not so bad. hahaha)
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