Model Bunny

‘ ‘’’’’’’’’’ ‘ ‘ Weighing scale breaks for a gal too plump Nibbling chocolates instead of carrot sticks, “I want to be a model, why is life such a dump?” So off to the gym she heads for a quick fix, fix! Her waist still a round 31- inches after months Of high fatty food she can’t scratch on her note, Auditions call, she’s craving to fit into slim pants With more Easter honey making her bloat, bloat She meets a retired, old magician who can nail it At last, curved figure she’ll have without big tummy, Swoosh! He pulls her from wrapped cage like a rabbit And swirls, turning poor gal into a fake Playboy bunny! © For Carol Brown’s Bunny Rabbit by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 9:06 AM
Nette, congrats on your bunny win! Rhonda :)
A   Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 8:22 PM
NETTE... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
Ronthorpe Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 3:06 PM
Nette, I really enjoyed this work. Well done, as usual. Congrats on making Carol's winners' list............................S.Ronthorpe
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 12:49 AM
Congratulations on your lovely bunny tale win xx
Guzzi Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 2:25 PM
wow..now that's some magic Congrad's on your hoppi' good win! Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 10:12 AM
cxongrats Nette luv on a fantastic win for this adorable write on miss model bunny luv.. sweetly visual and grand ..
Eastman Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations on the win. LOL.
Brown Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations on your winning piece and thank you for supporting my "Bunny Rabbits" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Minardi Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Fascinating, Nette. I love how you put philosophy inside this poem. :D
Fraser Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 1:33 PM
Oh my! Princess, your King is chuckling big time this wonderful Monday evening in the Kingdom of Scotland. Good luck in Carol's fine contest with this humorous piece :) xxxx
Brown Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 7:51 AM
Thank you Nette for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 10:29 PM
nice nice..... good luck in the coontest...pd
Guzzi Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 3:56 PM
Nice Bunny write! [nette use YOUR OWN 4 lines re: Et cetera Contest] Light & Love
Sivey Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 2:28 PM
Ha ha, this is a really good and humorous write Nette! I understand the seriousness of the poem, but it was said in a light tone and the ending is just too funny! This is a wonderful poem my friend! Great Work!!
Kendrick Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 1:44 PM
Cute one for the contest..Reads like winning material..Enjoyed the chuckle..Good luck in the contest..Sara
Johnson Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 1:25 PM
very well done babe, lifes a battle till its won, everythin makes me fatter some:)
Poet Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 11:52 AM
Hi Nette,this is a very cute write from you.I am enjoying the entries of this contest.Carol will like it.Best wishes.(12:15 A).
Fitzgerald Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 11:00 AM
Loved this Nette all the best in the contest , Hugs and best wishes , Declan ...
Susan Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 10:45 AM
I love my chocolate too! no carrot sticks for me. creative take on the contest :) also, i did write grainy photos for your contest but I was away without internet and missed it :(
Sweetheart Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 10:42 AM
oh such a cutie Nette luv great idea to make her a model diva bunny luv.. good luck in contest.. Carol will be smiling ..happy Sunday too..
Falotico Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 9:38 AM
Carol will love this!!!!! A- plus perfect write ..... love n hugs Michael
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 9:09 AM
Hmmm, I want to see what this fake playboy bunny looks like!! Cute tale, and I like how it was a female human bunny. A different take on a bunny tale!! How are you, Nette? I haven't seen you in a little while! (by the way, 31 inch waist is not so bad. hahaha)
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