Mockery

Mockery of opulence creates vicarious consequence. An impetus of confidence will exult consciousness, adorn chasm of commoness, silken providence. August 27, 2018 Eight Word Challenge- 8 Contest By John Hamilton Fifth Place Eight Words - 1.Silken 2. Chasm 3. Exult 4. Adorn 5. Impetus 6. Mockery 7. Opulence 8. Vicarious

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Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 6/5/2019 10:06:00 PM

The words cleverly combined in an elegant verse. Well composed, Susan

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 11/5/2018 11:50:00 AM

Ahh such a lovely poem this is, I absolutely love the message behind it, you have said so much in just a few words, I see that it has won a conteat, so many many congratulations to you, good luck and have a really nice day

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/29/2018 4:19:00 PM

You found a fun way to piece the words together. I enjoyed!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/27/2018 7:43:00 PM

For me, each complex, profound thought peeled away its truth in a way that totally resonates with my own perspective of truth. This is impressive, it is wisdom and quickens my hope for like-minds actually being in the universe (I often wonder about those I share the planet with.) With gratitude, I enjoyed .... CayCay

Constance La France

Date: 10/10/2018 11:44:00 AM

Susan, beautifully penned and congratulations on you win~

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/1/2018 11:03:00 AM

back to find this wonderful poetry, so glad i did.

Ashley Conte

Date: 9/27/2018 2:41:00 PM

Congratulations on placing high, Susan!

Susan Gentry
Date: 9/28/2018 11:15:00 AM

Thanks, Ashley.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/17/2018 10:13:00 PM

I'm even later than Michelle, but I too want to congratulate you on this truly innovate write. (Miss reading your work. Hope all is well). Best wishes, Gershon

Susan Gentry
Date: 9/28/2018 11:15:00 AM

Thank you! Appreciate that.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/15/2018 12:37:00 PM

Sorry this is a little late, but wanted to congratulate you on your win in the contest!

Susan Gentry
Date: 9/28/2018 11:14:00 AM

Thanm you for reading and commenting.

Viv Wigley

Date: 9/9/2018 1:22:00 AM

Congrats, Susan, I sat and thunk about this contest but couldn't get into the groove. You obviously did, well done! Viv x

Susan Gentry
Date: 9/28/2018 11:13:00 AM

Thanks.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/4/2018 9:04:00 PM

Sincere congratulations for your win in John's contest, Susan, so charming - blessings and continued success, my friend! :-)

Susan Gentry
Date: 9/28/2018 11:13:00 AM

Thank you.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/4/2018 12:40:00 AM

Congratulations, Susan on your win with such a cute verse.

Susan Gentry
Date: 9/28/2018 11:12:00 AM

Thank you.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 9/3/2018 2:05:00 PM

You blended the chosen words with such simplicity!

Susan Gentry
Date: 9/28/2018 11:06:00 AM

Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2018 7:15:00 PM

wow, this is SO succinct. Meanwhile, I nearly wrote a novel with the words!!! Way to do it, Susan

Susan Gentry
Date: 9/28/2018 11:06:00 AM

Thanks for commenting.

John Gondolf

Date: 8/30/2018 2:07:00 PM

Wow, Susan, it only took you nineteen words to use the eight required. I would say that is very frugal and pretty darn impressive. Best of luck. John

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/30/2018 7:34:00 PM

Thank you!