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Mock Orange Blossoms

Early summer flowering deciduous shrubs, And I among them came and went with Philadelphus virginalis, Their brightening solar ships. Its natural tendency is to grow vase-shaped, Clipping encourages the plant to fill out And become dense, and in my final spring It performed beautifully, flowering prolifically. Mock orange is not a heavy feeder. It loves sun and reads memories On cactus leaves with sideways glares, Though on an "established" plant, One should prune out about one-third Of the old growth (the trivialities of life's Agur), Allowing the gloried lightness of day To seize upon bright green leaves.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/29/2009 11:48:00 AM
Matt, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/25/2009 1:57:00 PM
Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 3:36:00 PM
Good luck in the next round, and hearty Congratulations for making it through the first one!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:53:00 PM
Congrats!!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on being in the round-one finals! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2009 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:10:00 AM
Well done, Matt best wishes in the next rounds.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/29/2009 9:29:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 8/28/2009 5:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 8/24/2009 3:32:00 PM
Wow...such creative description! Excellent work here, Matt...well deserving this featured section! Well done! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:55:00 PM
Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~
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Date: 8/24/2009 3:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Matt. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2009 2:09:00 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:14:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Matt.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/7/2009 8:40:00 PM
For example, the following is the only part of the poem that I made up: And I among them came and went with Their brightening solar ships. and in my final spring It loves sun and reads memories On cactus leaves with sideways glares, (the trivialities of life's Agur) Allowing the gloried lightness of day To seize upon bright green leaves. The rest I copied off a how-to site. Every other line. I find it interesting that it still talks about flowers though Ive cut half of it out.
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Date: 4/7/2009 8:34:00 PM
Just to clarify...I wrote this poem about a half hour after realizing I "owned" mock orange blossoms...they grew along the side of the stairs to my place, as my brother/roommate discovered. I remembered wearing a leis of mock oranges for a high school graduation (I went to school in hawaii where they have such traditions...and live here now), and the smell was like no other flower... I wrote this after reading online how to care for them...every other line is instructional;the other "poetic"
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Date: 4/7/2009 10:32:00 AM
Love the way you provide a vivid image of the orange shrub and also convey how to care for it. Very nice, Matt!
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Date: 4/6/2009 4:38:00 AM
the title did make me want to read this ... but i sure didn't know all that you write there ... really cool write! ~ Arany
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Date: 4/5/2009 3:34:00 PM
Interesting and very informative! I loved the imagery.
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