Richard Lamoureux Poet Dodoitsu

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Turtle walks slowly on ground
Shell is home and protection
A land and water dweller
Owns first mobile home


By:  Richard Lamoureux For Russell Sivy's contest: Natural Dodoitsu
First attempt at this style, hope I got it right

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Casarah Nance August 5, 2014 at 8:41 PM haha great! if you haven't written one for the free verse turtle contest going right now, you should enter this one, it is super creative! I love your mind babe! Richard Lamoureux August 6, 2014 at 8:13 AM Thanks Casarah, I will check it out.

Debbie Duncan August 4, 2013 at 5:57 PM very cute ,,,, and it's a winner. glad you like my The Great Swan ;} Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2013 at 7:10 PM Thanks Debbie!

Skat A February 7, 2013 at 2:12 PM A nice winning poem~LUV*SKAT Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2013 at 2:31 PM Thanks Skat

Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2013 at 9:33 PM Congrats to the funniest one on the winners list!! I sure enjoyed this one. Richard Lamoureux January 13, 2013 at 1:30 AM This one came crawling to me and bit me on the funny bone.

Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2013 at 10:03 PM RICHARD, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD Richard Lamoureux January 13, 2013 at 1:30 AM Thanks Linda

Barbara Gorelick January 11, 2013 at 12:22 AM This made me smile..clever! congrats to you. BG Richard Lamoureux January 11, 2013 at 5:05 AM Thanks Barbara.

Melani Udaeta January 10, 2013 at 9:01 PM I love animals :) cute! Richard Lamoureux January 10, 2013 at 11:40 PM Me too, thanks for commenting

Seren Roberts January 9, 2013 at 10:39 PM Well done broughta smile to my face ...Seren Richard Lamoureux January 9, 2013 at 11:28 PM Thanks Seren

Joyce Johnson January 9, 2013 at 9:36 PM Oh how clever and true. congratulations Richard. Love, Joyce Richard Lamoureux January 9, 2013 at 11:28 PM Thanks so much.

Audrey Haick January 9, 2013 at 2:46 PM Congratulations on your fantastic win, Richard! Always, Annalise Richard Lamoureux January 9, 2013 at 11:29 PM Thanks, this was a fun one.

Mehnaz Veetil January 9, 2013 at 1:50 PM Congratulations ... Richard Lamoureux January 9, 2013 at 11:30 PM Thanks Mehnaz

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 9, 2013 at 1:20 PM Congratulations on your winning spot Richard , this is so good xx Richard Lamoureux January 9, 2013 at 11:30 PM Thanks Mandy

Kash Poet November 15, 2012 at 6:16 AM haha...So true.A cute poem.Enjoyed the read. Richard Lamoureux November 15, 2012 at 6:30 AM Thanks Kash, I like the new photo, nice seeing you without the glasses

Toquyen Harrell November 14, 2012 at 2:53 PM Lol, ahh too funny, Richard. Yes. Never thought of that. True mobil :)) Richard Lamoureux November 14, 2012 at 3:36 PM Glad you liked it, thanks!