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Misunderstood

She looked so beautiful in her evening dress - her perfume blended so well like a jigsaw pattern, together with her smile. I hugged her, and kissed her cheeks. My girlfriend witnessed the entire act; she threw our Valentine's cake at my face - that's not how I anticipated to enjoy the cake, like Christmas snowballs.... Her body swayed like a wrecking ball, as she stormed out of the party. For a moment the room was dead silent - no sound of music, glasses, or conversations in the air, not even whispers of gossip. My girlfriend didn't know that I was having a moment with my sister.....

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Date: 2/26/2016 11:55:00 AM
anytime... :)
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/27/2016 1:41:00 AM
;)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/27/2016 1:40:00 AM
*^_^*
Date: 2/25/2016 10:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/26/2016 3:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan!!! ;-)
Date: 2/25/2016 9:52:00 AM
Teddy, I simply enjoyed your write! Congrats on such a high lacement!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/25/2016 4:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Balveen!! :-)
Date: 2/24/2016 1:51:00 PM
Teddy ..thanks for the reply
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/25/2016 6:01:00 AM
Welcome Linda ;-)
Date: 2/24/2016 4:07:00 AM
Wow that's the beauty of relations.. she is right in her place.. Congrats teddy.. great win!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/24/2016 1:48:00 PM
Lol. You are right Dr. Upma. Thank you for your applause!!! *^_^*
Date: 2/23/2016 5:26:00 PM
Teddy, nice to see you place high on my daughters contest list... Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/24/2016 1:47:00 PM
WOW!!! Thank you so much for your applause Linda!!! *^_^*
Date: 2/23/2016 4:36:00 PM
Oh, my goodness. This is very well-written. Congrats on your win. Janice
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/24/2016 1:45:00 PM
Thank you so much Janice!! *^_^*
Date: 2/23/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest it was an honor reading you rock:)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/24/2016 1:43:00 PM
Thank you so much T *^_^* You are very much welcome!!! ;-)
Date: 2/15/2016 7:11:00 PM
Sometimes past situations leave woman with insecurities and missed opportunities.. great write
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/17/2016 8:05:00 AM
You are right, Clarke. Thanks for commenting on my work! *^_^*
Date: 2/6/2016 10:03:00 PM
sometimes jealousy grabs hold before explanations are offered and what looks bad is really only an innocent moment! Nicely penned :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/7/2016 3:58:00 PM
Thank you for enjoying my work Sandra! *^_^* You've summarised my poem so perfectly!!!!
Date: 2/6/2016 5:37:00 AM
Embarrassing but funny. great write, Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/7/2016 3:56:00 PM
Hahaha. Thanks Daniel ;-)

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