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Misty Mire

somewhere a head lays on a bed upon nudge hill and laughs at the rain © Harry J Horsman 2019

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Date: 3/28/2019 5:25:00 PM
This sets a great mood harry
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Date: 3/23/2019 7:20:00 AM
Very unique, Harry. All the best ~Warren
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Date: 3/16/2019 12:11:00 PM
Love the unique perspective in this poem, Harry! Very creative. :)
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Date: 3/15/2019 1:18:00 PM
This is cross-my-eyes, intoxicating-profound. Cross my eyes because the words can't be breezed over, no - my focus was needed to tread the depth where you took my breath. You surpassed good and with joy I surpassed light reading for profound worth heeding. A pleasure. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 3/14/2019 12:38:00 AM
So true.
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Date: 3/13/2019 10:00:00 PM
Beautiful Harry.
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Date: 3/13/2019 2:48:00 PM
I love sleeping in a tent when there is a light rain falling. It's so peaceful. Great job here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/13/2019 2:21:00 PM
- Just laugh :) - Raindrops are like diamond jewelery that glitters, bright lights when the sun breaks through :) - Whoever doesn't see it ... is blind :) - A lovely haiku, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2019 6:54:00 PM
So interesting. I love this!
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Date: 3/12/2019 3:52:00 PM
Lovely haiku--I like the images you built, Harry.
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Date: 3/12/2019 3:04:00 PM
rain is a natural tranquilizer...this is really a good 'ku, harry...huggs
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Date: 3/12/2019 1:20:00 PM
Haha since I retired I do just that but used to work out in it so I dont feel guilty. Tom.
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Date: 3/12/2019 1:04:00 PM
Loved it Harry...
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Date: 3/12/2019 12:10:00 PM
made me smile Harry as I'm indoors and free from the rain, I like the unusual formatting of your haiku:-)
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