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Misty Rain

MISTY RAIN Rain washes my mind and my memory; Pain and heartache remain - but dilute. Stain removal forever is impossible; Reign of tears is over, but my soul is mute. Eke out memories that still exist, though meek : Cheek feathered by her soothing breath so missed, Speak her name, imagine a shower of her kisses as Weak end of downpour yields to mist. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written for Rick Parise's Contest LENTO POETRY

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/14/2011 1:09:00 PM
Such a great write. I so enjoyed. congrats. BG
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Date: 8/13/2011 8:24:00 PM
Yours and Andie's were both very mature sophisticated writes. I have no clue why mine was 2?? I give you two HUGE kudos! a 7 Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 8/13/2011 3:57:00 PM
Please excuse hasty congrats - I'm posting before I got logged out again. Many congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 8/13/2011 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Rick, Sydney
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Date: 8/13/2011 10:52:00 AM
Very nice poem. Congratulations on your HM, hope to see your name soon. Lee
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Date: 8/13/2011 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by ^Rick Parise "Lento Poetry" Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2011 8:31:00 AM
hey Sydney, congrats on your HM,David
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Date: 8/12/2011 11:51:00 PM
Congrats Sydney on your HM in Lento Poetry contest with this interesting write.. enjoy special honor.. also Rick asked me to pass along his congrats to u as well as to all other winning poets ..
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Date: 8/12/2011 11:31:00 PM
This is beautiful, sydney. Glad I finally got to see it. And yup, it's as I imagined (what I said in the soup mail just now!)
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Date: 8/12/2011 6:44:00 PM
lol@koc! Lovin' that last line, Syd.
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Date: 7/26/2011 8:43:00 AM
the king of crap is back! j/kkidding..or am i the one who has been missing... a great lento that gives me a bit of a gentle nudge toward a unique sadland that lives inside your head. :) huggs, nette
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Sidney Beck
Date: 7/26/2011 10:54:00 AM
great to hear your praising voice....king of crap indeed ! L O L...yes Netski I was away for two weeks or more - on business in Ireland...but now I am back so you can start to graze afresh on my new phrases and pick the best for your entries...with fond affection K of C

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