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Mistletoe

starry-eyed-- holly gleams bringing zest dances weave till notes pause-- our eyes lock voices ring “kiss! “ spell cast— mistletoe Charlieku 3-3-3 Contest For Charles Messina 12/12/2018

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/6/2019 1:48:00 PM

That mistletoe can work magic. Enjoyed reading your winning work. Congrats. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2019 11:47:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/1/2019 7:56:00 PM

A beautiful Charlieku, Nette. Great write and well done with wonderful imagery. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. I hope you have a Healthy & Happy New Year...hugs Charlie

Paul Callus

Date: 12/15/2018 5:07:00 AM

A lovely, seasonal and romantic set of ChKu, Nette. I like the link between 'starry-eyed'-'locked eyes'-'spell cast'. Hugs // paul

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/14/2018 5:15:00 AM

So much imagery in such a small package! This was great!

Lyric Man

Date: 12/13/2018 8:44:00 AM

Like a scene from a Hallmark Movie.. very romantic and the perfect use of words and flow. Nette, I'm a big fan of this little write!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/13/2018 7:18:00 AM

Zest..dance..kiss..life is great..lovely poem, nette.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/13/2018 2:35:00 AM

I wish I had one!!! :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/12/2018 8:35:00 PM

Oh, you brat with the kissing greenery have brought a smile to me - I thank you for that. This is a delight. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/12/2018 5:58:00 PM

Hello Nette, yes that is a mistletoe. I have never seen one. have a nice evening my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/12/2018 3:34:00 PM

you cast a spell on me Nette, gl in the contest, it reads nice .

Vegter Papyrus

Date: 12/12/2018 3:23:00 PM

Puckered up I am! ... if you're going to fast for forty days, you may not want to come by my page. I have food for thought and a lil sin in my pen...and I wouldn't want to taint the process. Humanly it may not be possible!! I've heard that was miraculous also?

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/12/2018 3:01:00 PM

Excellent Nette. I love it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/12/2018 2:03:00 PM

- Lovely "Charlieku", Nette :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)