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Mistified

Just
like a
sky upon
ground—fog settles 
like on bended knee; this broken honor

its thirst on my brow, behind the towers
just where I am—
dry, it's more
heaven
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Date: 2/16/2025 11:36:00 AM
Very cool title on this thought provoking tetractys.
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Date: 2/27/2023 10:42:00 AM
Beautiful! What imagery, dear poet!
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