Mister Time

Through drowsy quivers of wired thoughts
I lose an hour in the morning 
to parry every second of vengeance, 
as if to hasten my night rituals
from the unrelenting pace of dawn-break…
and as tunnels honk, my eyes forget
to relish the yellow buds-in- waiting.

Again, Mr. Time… you steal my fresh hours
while my soul wanders far beyond
a metered compass for a rendezvous
with my day’s free- flowing  motion.
Now, my  hands crave to make love
with the softness of earth’s clay 
or bathe in a camphor sun, lapping a wind.

Your meter is not mine to rent or borrow;
and by the glory of night and moon
the bards’ tale knows my songs...
allow me then to age here,
groping with the endless fingers
of sweet eternity.


Funny how time seems to fly contest
Sponsor:Brenda Chiri-Carroll    repost  10/6/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 18, 2015 at 5:58 PM
Nette, Congratulations on getting the placement your poem did not get the first time... LINDA
Ryerson Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 3:21 PM
No N/A here and add one more to the member's favorite count...The last line just BLEW ME AWAY...I've read this twice already but I think I'll read it: 'just one more time'...
Haight Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 10:52 AM
Nice to see your lovely poem showcased on the winner's list, Nette! Congrats on your win. Sandra
Allison Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 4:33 AM
This time you got the recognition you deserve Nette:-) Congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
Carmack Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 1:45 AM
It appears Time wasn't the only thief. Congrats Nette.
Vaso Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 9:23 PM
I just wanted you to know, I came to read this one again, sometimes you have no explanation for why a poem, just seems so right, and this is one of them!
Haight Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 5:05 PM
How true about time, Nette...I love your unique theme on this, and I really identify with your feelings...that extra hour is never really ours...7, Hugs, Sandra
Callus Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 2:12 PM
Great take on this theme, Nette! You know time for what it is, and you deal with it using beautiful poetry. gl in the contest. #7 // paul
Sirak Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 8:12 AM
Wow! you took the contest theme to a whole new level! So original and creative.
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 5:31 AM
Hello Mr. Time wait a bit for nette...love. Sure a topper
Jones Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 8:06 PM
Yo Nettski. Long time, yeah, I know. Let's collaborate agan, wanna? Namaste.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 11:31 AM
What an original and intriguing entry for the contest Nette. I am sure to see this high on t he winner's list!
Trifiatis Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 7:29 AM
Time: This master of universe that nothing escapes from his laws, becomes a liberator and a dynast according to our needs! Brilliant verses, great poem, dearest Nette! Good luck on the contest!
Vaso Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 11:51 PM
Very beautiful, when I read that title I thought "Mister Times Up" and I was going to say I heard that alot!!!
Peranteau Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 8:00 PM
You've managed to turn one of my most distasteful times of the year into....well, if some poet can come up with a clever write like this because of "times theift"....so be it ! ;) Nette, I don't follow that day light savings time shenanigans. It's all a bunch of cow pies ! LOL I get up at two thirty in the morn, and go to bed at 7:30 pm, unless I am on the net. Anywho, a pleasure reading you this evening...you really wrote a fine write here ! Blessings...love james
Parker Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 3:23 PM
Time is the master of all that none can fight but rather endure, yet the more we enjoy the faster it moves
Romaine Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 1:25 PM
Hey Nette, a wonderful imagery on just how fleeting time is. Wish you good success in the contest. Be Blessed, Neva
Ongado Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 12:49 PM
I was catching my breath while reading this fantastic piece of art. Nette. Darn time, it sometimes isn't on our side. I dislike that feeling but I love your poem!
Ongado Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 12:50 PM
Been gone for awhile, will try to race with time, hah!
Relish Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 12:38 PM
o my Nette.. this is a winner for sure... loved this wonderful write.. nad!
Petersen Potter Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Excellent pen Nette! I enjoyed reading your timing piece my dear friend. Well written! A 7 from me! GL in the contest! I wish you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :)D.
Gonza Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 12:26 PM
I was entranced with this excellent poem. Time can be a friend or foe, and you managed to impress upon me an edge-like energy and left me with a haunting, aftertaste. Bravo!
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 11:57 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..I need to check this contest out to see what it is all about..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Andresen Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 11:19 AM
- A great poem dear Nette !- I wish you best of luck in contest !! - (My week is only reached:THURSDAY :))) ..... yes, I think you are sleepy :)))) - I understand why you're writing about time :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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