Mistake

We are the ones who don't realize what is sweet or salt ... Those who walk meaningless... We are the ones who imagine be the chosen ones ...! And among all who live for that, we are the ones who complain of everything, for not knowing anything ...!

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/3/2020 5:13:00 AM

Hello Alakas, yes we are the ones that that complain about everything. Yes we imagine that we are the chosen ones. Which is a mistake. Salute Darlene.My dear friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/3/2020 3:52:00 PM

Hello Alakas, yes we are mortals.. yes God shares messages among us all. yes we must work for the benefit of God. Salute my dear friend. Darlene.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 10/3/2020 3:15:00 PM

Yes we are simply mortals... God shares messages among all...anyway this is it...we have to work for benefit of God... salute my dear, alkas