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Mist of Night Wafts--Lune

from mist-clad tassels

immaculate leaves of night waft

bearing frosty scent



Andrea Dietrich's Pretty Little Lunes  Contest
8/6/2015   Collom Lune # 6

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Thomas Martin Date: 8/19/2015 2:58:00 PM Do not usually comment on near haiku writing here but this one is wonderful!! Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 8/16/2015 11:02:00 PM Perfect depict of the pic nette! Congrats on a wonderful win! Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 8/16/2015 10:21:00 PM A unique rendering of the photo! Congrats on your win, Nette! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/16/2015 8:43:00 PM A sweet win Nette... LINDA Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 8/16/2015 1:29:00 AM Nette, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 8/15/2015 7:58:00 PM Lovely write Nette...Congrats on your win Login to Reply

Abdul Malik Date: 8/15/2015 9:29:00 AM It tempts me to take a dip in the frosty lake! Nice. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/15/2015 7:27:00 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 8/15/2015 7:13:00 AM Grats on your win with this beautiful frosty write :) Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 8/15/2015 5:59:00 AM An appealing sensual take on an inspiring visual, Nette. Beautiful! ~ Congratulations on a most worthy win:) Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/15/2015 1:01:00 AM Nette, not many chose this picture. What I liked best that you did was the way you used alliteration.All those T sounds were so CRISP to go with that FROSTY scent! Each line sang with beauty! Congrats in my contest. Login to Reply

Leon Datu Date: 8/6/2015 12:58:00 PM Great use of metaphors. A tasseled view of trees scenting a cold night is a wonder. i revel at your poetry! Login to Reply Leon Datu Date: 8/6/2015 12:59:00 PM make it 7 +

Constance La France Date: 8/6/2015 12:58:00 PM Nette, so very beautiful for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, but she .. I am looking forward to the ending too Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/6/2015 11:46:00 AM - Really wonderful !!!! - I wish you luck in the contest, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Lyva Marty Date: 8/6/2015 12:48:00 AM This glorious poem stirs and heightens the senses, opens the eyes to the natural sounds and beauty of a view. Login to Reply

Gabby Sabre Date: 8/6/2015 12:18:00 AM Elegant, beautiful setting and poem! The colorful imagery gives the reader a taste of the scene. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/5/2015 3:41:00 PM The imagery is sublime Nette - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7 Login to Reply

Carly Lalion Date: 8/5/2015 3:01:00 PM Exquisite picture upon which misty, crystal-clear thoughts take flight I admire your art! Login to Reply