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Misspelled

I feel like I want to cross the boundaries with you I feel like I want to tell you about me, my feelings about you I feel like I need not to Am afraid of losing you if I do so Am afraid that I don't have that pass Even thou you are my biggest sport to cheer Do I have to spell correctly? Do I have to proofread? Or do you want me to come mispelled? Or do you want me to keep no time? Because I will misspell, if you want me too

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Lewis Nyaga

Date: 4/3/2015 9:59:00 PM

Nice pen Njeri.. second guessing is borne out of self critique and the great ones do that objectively.. its and indicator to consciousness of the self the path towards enlightenment... i loove it #7//hugs and blessings

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 4/8/2015 3:24:00 AM

Thank you Lewis for your kind words and for the 7. Good day my friend.

Louis Spence

Date: 3/28/2015 10:48:00 AM

Njeri. Thanks for the compliments on my poem POETS. Particularly liked your Misspelled poem. Funny and clever. Good stuff.

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/29/2015 12:55:00 AM

You are welcome. Thank you for commenting on my poem too. Be blessed

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2015 2:04:00 PM

words from the heart do not matter if there are some misspellings. I like the metaphor of this one.

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/28/2015 6:03:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. Yes this poem kinda has two explanations to it; one about my misspellings and the other a romantic metaphor.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/24/2015 9:53:00 AM

I love this poem. There are so many layers of meaning. I think this is so beautifully romantic. I also did not read one word literally. It spoke to me between the lines and around the lines.

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/28/2015 6:00:00 AM

Thank you Maurice. Yes it does have a deep meaning too.

Julia Ward

Date: 3/24/2015 8:30:00 AM

Congratulations for writing a sweet little poem with vulnerable sentiments. Julia, xx

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/24/2015 8:41:00 AM

Thank you Julia for your sweet comment.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/24/2015 6:23:00 AM

I often misspell even though I have spellcheck. I Think what the heck, I can still wreck and not create the right effect, I guess I'm not perfect so In the end if I don't have the right effect, I hope others won't detect my little defects! Keep telling us about you as for me I'm glad you do because your words ring true and you say a lot with just a few.

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/24/2015 8:38:00 AM

And that's why I wrote this poem. Coz I may proofread my work but I don't notice the errors until I post a poem online. And that really drives me crazy. Thank you Rick.

Ashraful Musaddeq

Date: 3/24/2015 1:15:00 AM

wow wonderful

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/24/2015 5:49:00 AM

Lol, thank you so much Ashraful.