Missing Miss Mavis

Life without her
would never be the same
She was the loudest, proudest
most endearingly brash
sugar-sweet and pickle-sour
five-foot-two, force to be reckoned with
that anyone in Yell county had ever met

I confess
I was somewhat obsessed
with Miss Mavis' hair as a child
perhaps it was the fact
that she was the only white woman
I'd ever seen sporting an
honest-to-Oh-My-Goodness Afro

And her hair hadn't always
looked like that
I'd seen photographic proof
pictures from the 60's that showed
her having a mile-high beehive
lacquered with layers of AquaNet
utterly unmovable 
much like Miss Mavis herself

Never married, Miss Mavis' house
was unapologetically pink
in varying shades
Pink carpet, wall-to-wall
pink wallpaper, curtains, bedspread
even the ceiling above your head
pink on the tiles of the bath
pink toilet?! pink sink
pink details down to the
homemade tissue-box cozies
Looking for all the world
like the inside of an old lady 'collector's edition'
Barbie house, with rainbow-colored clashes
of crocheted kitsch thrown about everywhere
piles of clothes draped over chairs
comfy but cluttered, it had a crazy air
of outrageous audaciousness

She was more comfortable
being herself
than anyone I'd ever known
so natural
as if to say
who else would I be?
It never occurred to her
to even try
to become someone else's ideal
She was that real
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 10/4/2018 3:07:00 PM
Love the great details, 'sugar sweet and pickle sour' and 'mile high beehive..layered with AquaNet' - my mother used to use AquaNet, that takes me back!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/4/2018 4:49:00 PM
So glad this brought back memories for you! I vaguely remember my best friend's mom using AquaNet... I used to beg her to fix my hair all the time!
Date: 10/3/2018 9:31:00 PM
I am a hundred percent in love with Miss Mavis now - the hair, the house, the comfortableness of her own skin. I love the way you grabbed me by the heart, my eyes and mind dancing with the first fast-paced paragraph, and did not release me until the last words - "she was that real." This is what great poetry is. A FAV for me, Missy! PS I had an afro in 1984 and I was styling!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/3/2018 10:53:00 PM
I was dying for you to see this... I knew as soon as I started writing that you would LOVE Miss Mavis! ;D And now I have the happy mental image of you rocking your 80's 'fro! So fun!!!
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