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Misplaced In Maroon Mists

I’m feral like a fox misplaced in the maroon mists of wilderness, only found in woeful woodland. My skin is blanketed in crimson balmy hyacinth feathers from a forsaken rainforest. Misguided on delusional paths, where spring-tides mirror liquified colors of warm diamond tears I’ve suppressed behind ice blue sighs. And I’ve seen splintered petals beneath thick-leaved jewel orchids, that surrendered to greying leaves on tainted twigs and broken branches. I’ve walked through fields of thorns where the musky scent of roses remained a poison to my aching soul. So, why does it feel like I’m chained from vines of changes, that suffocate the sun within me, crucifying the fragility of premature begonia beginnings? Am I to follow the darkness, to cast away the evil, constantly pushing me into a cave of cacophonous silence? As I see beyond the gossamer veil, hiding sharpened talons of treacherous eagles- flying amongst vicious vampires; emerald foes masked as friends, feeding my conscience with cruel concoctions, oblivious to the truth, that I am a bark believer of marigold miracles. So let the steel black breeze and the faceless ghosts of fleeting time, witness how I rise against wicked wolves lurking behind stars within a chiffon laced canopy of nightfalls. For, I am more than the empty labels you’ve placed, like the shame, I’ve buried beneath lyrical lies drizzling from vanilla skies.

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Date: 8/29/2023 6:49:00 PM
A sublime write, IE, warmest congratulations on your win! Ascension oft brings about a vibrational mismatch, the eagle soars high grazing the heavens, even spirit bilocates between darkness and light, in the human experience
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Date: 8/28/2023 10:06:00 AM
Hi Inky! Every line of this soulful journey is filled with amazing word pairings - "marigold miracles," "steel black breeze," "lyrical lies," "begonia beginnings" - smooth alliterations, and underlying depth of emotion in the journey of the soul. You have an amazing ability to write in the color of the searching spirit. Congratulations on your win. Blessings for your continued pilgrimage.
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Date: 8/28/2023 4:08:00 AM
- You have painted an amazing picture, Ink :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 8/27/2023 12:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara
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Date: 8/27/2023 6:40:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well-deserved contest win with this lovely poem. Your imagery is unparalleled, painting vivid pictures in the reader's mind and leaving a lasting impression.
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Ink Empress
Date: 8/27/2023 8:31:00 AM
Wow im truly in shock. Thank u and congratulations too
Date: 8/27/2023 5:24:00 AM
Back to congratulate you. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Ink Empress
Date: 8/27/2023 8:30:00 AM
Oh wow lucky 7 thank u and congratulations tooo beautiful
Date: 8/26/2023 1:57:00 PM
The imagery is flawless and your metaphors enticing, Ink. Your grasp of experiences that most have during their life are extraordinary and the ability to transfer knowing into poetry is a gift. A FAV for my list, my new friend. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry. Bill
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Date: 8/26/2023 6:14:00 AM
This poem is an exquisite showcase of poetic genius. It is expertly crafted, evoking the sensation of aimlessly strolling through an enchanting woodland. Each line is a delightful tapestry of enchanting words, weaving together a vivid landscape that captivates the senses. The imagery is vivid and vibrant as if a skilled painter has meticulously portrayed every color, texture, and detail of this mystical forest. It is a journey that immerses the reader in a kaleidoscope of emotions, as the words themselves become a gateway to experience the beauty and wonder of this otherworldly realm.
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Date: 8/26/2023 5:09:00 AM
Simply amazing. Faving this. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 8/25/2023 12:54:00 PM
Great poetry as is your usual fare, my friend. Gotto watch out those vampire have a nasty deep bite and viciously long claws. I know, I've been caught by them a few times. Your poem is a truly enjoyable read too. God bless you...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/26/2023 8:01:00 AM
My friend their were several but not one named Lucinda. The three that were worst by far, were Tammy, Ann and Olivia. Each one of those destroyed me. But I did survive and even prospered. I come from a very, very tough bloodline. God bless.
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/25/2023 4:54:00 PM
Was her name Lucinda? Jus askin
Date: 8/25/2023 11:17:00 AM
Well written poem which feels like wandering in a mystical forest. Enjoyed. love phyl
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Date: 8/25/2023 10:32:00 AM
Ooh goody I get to be first to comment. This one feels familiar, I seem to remember commenting on those vicious vampires placing empty labels and engaging in lyrical lies. There are a handful here too Inky. Be careful.
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/25/2023 11:08:00 AM
You're an endless wellspring of inspiration my friend
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Ink Empress
Date: 8/25/2023 10:59:00 AM
Ah kingy i write way too much about vampires lol this one i wrote just today. Haha thank u sooo much i appreciate sincere souls like u .

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