Misplaced Care

At first glance I thought
It was a toy, a ragged thing,
perhaps dropped by a small boy.
Lost or abandoned?
Either way
it was being trampled on today

The pavement pushers,
marching through the high street
with shopping on their minds,
they didn’t see it,
Flat and grey,
matching this abysmal rainy day

Against the grain I knelt
To rescue this sodden and
forlorn, forgotten friend.
Its edges revealed, 
I knew then
It was not the frippery I had thought

Lurching back, retching,
I tumbled through legs, bags,
Away from the abhorrence.
I didn’t grieve it
that dead rat
I just left it there, all grey and flat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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George   Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 3:40 PM
Wow!!!!What a picture you paint,Kaye. Thanks for sharing. bfn Lainie
Locke Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 5:53 AM
Thanks so much Lainie, glad you liked it!
Sietesantos Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 11:34 AM
Congratulations on a very fine well-deserved win, Kaye! Beautiful write!
Locke Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 12:55 PM
Many thanks Pandita. Very excited to get a mention! K
Smith Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 6:52 PM
You gave me the hee bee gee bees ...lol...Rats and I don't get along...wonderful Tim
Locke Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 3:11 AM
hehee...sorry 'bout that Tim! Don't worry it wasn't a real rat...only a love one!!
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