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Misguided Power

In the hollows of power’s grip, where shadows twist the heart’s cry, there—mights build thrones on backs bent, where abuse wears the mask of guidance, control, a cloak woven with the thread of fear. Power thrives in silence, feeding on the unspoken. Manipulation, subtle as the serpent’s whisper, curls around dreams, tightening, threats drip, venomous, eroding hope, indifference, a cold moon, shuns the warmth of a shared sun, selfishness seizes, tight-fisted, squelching the laughter of the young, the joy of the old. The beauty of a soul, effaced, a canvas scrubbed too raw, bearing the brutal strokes of unkindness— yet, beneath this, a pulse, a flicker: resilience, a defiance against the night, rising, always rising, despite the crush of the dark.

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Date: 4/19/2024 9:15:00 AM
Don, your opinions are intelligent and deeply moving. Your poetry effectively captures the devastating impact of the abuse of power. I've observed it. Looking at it is rather unpleasant. The final verse demonstrates a strong commitment despite the potential consequences.
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/19/2024 9:20:00 AM
Sotto, I truly appreciate what you have shared. By design, the poem can be understood from many standpoints. I always look at the 'ground' of power. Is it wealth, politics, beliefs and values, our sense of responsibility, fera or anger, mutual respect, or is the simple motivation to have power over others? Thank you. Don
Date: 4/19/2024 5:41:00 AM
This can have numerous applications. An abusive, controlling parent, or a powerful, wealthy hierarchy building it's magnificent structures on the backs of slave labor, from the pyramids of Egypt to the Vatican. When I read your last stanza I think of Joseph, sold be his brothers, accused unjustly. How he suffered, only to rise again
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/19/2024 5:57:00 AM
Tom. Yes, this poem could apply to all those situations and others, as we look across today's world. Thanks! Cheers, Don
Date: 4/19/2024 5:38:00 AM
your poem eloquently speaks to the destructive, soul crushing nature of the misguided use of power. You've seen it; I've seen it. Watching it is gut wrenching. Victimized by it requires the resilience in your last verse. Such beauty in your soulful and wise words, Don. Enjoy your day, Sara
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/19/2024 5:56:00 AM
Thanks Sara. Yes, so true, and thus this poem. Have a great day. Don

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